FORGOTTEN
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She was found on the side of the country road in Australia, with no memory of anything except her first name.
Haunting glimpses of terrifying ordeals flickers in her mind from time to time. Then one particularly disturbing nightmare occurs. So horrible. So vivid. So real.
Maybe it is.
Smitchie embarks on a quest to discover her past. Her choices will have the power to change the world..
Chapter 1
The Side Of The Road
The last thing I remember is a bright light shining in my face. Brighter than the sun. Then complete darkness, a comforting hum in my head. Strangely, I feel warm and peaceful. Like in a mother's womb.
I open my eyes. Im lying down in the grass, next to a road.
What am I doing here? It's the first thing that comes to mind.
"I need to go home" I muttered. I pick and dust myself off and starts walking.
Then I realised, Where am I going?
Home.
Where is home?
I don't know.
Where is my family?
I don't know.
Who is my family?
I don't know.
What do I do?
I don't know.
Who am I?
I DON'T KNOW!
What is my name?
Smitchie. That's all I know"
I felt so confused and scared. I don't remember anything. I walk back to my spot and squat down, hugging my knees. A few hours go by, several cars go by and questioning looks go my way.
Before I knew it, the sun's last rays glimmeres on the grass and slowly fades. Darkness creeps in and it starts to get cold. For the first time, i look down at myself. I am wearing a strange dress.
It's beautiful.
Seamless and silky, fusioned with purple, blue and red with no sleeves. But it's not exactly warm. My teeth starts to chatter, my body shaking.
Headlights light up the road and I see an old truck coming. It slows down to a stop beside me, engine groaning. The windows roll down and the driver looks out. He has a warm look about him. Blue eyes, black hair, tanned skin. He looks like he's in his late 20s.
"What 'n earth are ya doing here miss? You'll freeze to death in that dress!" his voice rumbles with an English accent.
"i don't know" I said, frowning.
"what do you mean, you don't know?"
" I don't remember anything!" my voice cracks.
He sighs "Oh wonderful.
Better get 'n, it'll snow at night"
I decide to take my chances with a stranger than the cold. For some reason, I trust him anyway.
So I get in
I open my eyes. Im lying down in the grass, next to a road.
What am I doing here? It's the first thing that comes to mind.
"I need to go home" I muttered. I pick and dust myself off and starts walking.
Then I realised, Where am I going?
Home.
Where is home?
I don't know.
Where is my family?
I don't know.
Who is my family?
I don't know.
What do I do?
I don't know.
Who am I?
I DON'T KNOW!
What is my name?
Smitchie. That's all I know"
I felt so confused and scared. I don't remember anything. I walk back to my spot and squat down, hugging my knees. A few hours go by, several cars go by and questioning looks go my way.
Before I knew it, the sun's last rays glimmeres on the grass and slowly fades. Darkness creeps in and it starts to get cold. For the first time, i look down at myself. I am wearing a strange dress.
It's beautiful.
Seamless and silky, fusioned with purple, blue and red with no sleeves. But it's not exactly warm. My teeth starts to chatter, my body shaking.
Headlights light up the road and I see an old truck coming. It slows down to a stop beside me, engine groaning. The windows roll down and the driver looks out. He has a warm look about him. Blue eyes, black hair, tanned skin. He looks like he's in his late 20s.
"What 'n earth are ya doing here miss? You'll freeze to death in that dress!" his voice rumbles with an English accent.
"i don't know" I said, frowning.
"what do you mean, you don't know?"
" I don't remember anything!" my voice cracks.
He sighs "Oh wonderful.
Better get 'n, it'll snow at night"
I decide to take my chances with a stranger than the cold. For some reason, I trust him anyway.
So I get in



50 Comments
Really good for a first chapter :) Keep going!
Really? Omg I like u :) Thankyou
Okay people!! Please comment on what you honestly think. Criticism are welcome. If you find it boring and it doesn't hold your attention, plz tell me. If anybody wants me to keep writing, tell me and I'll tell you whenever I've wrote a new chapter
:D
I like it so far :) honestly, it's hard to tell how it'll turn out. But so far, ITS AMAZING!!!!! :)
Thankyou!!! Is that a good, thing, no knowing how it'll turn out? Tbh, Idk myself. I'm making the story up as I go along. OMG thanks! Should I keep writing?
This is awesome :3
beaming thanks! :D
I definatly want to read on........ :P (: :) :D :] c:
Yay!! My first successful story! Thanks for reading :DDDDDDDDD :]]
wow, this is really good. it grips the attention and makes you want to know what happens next! Please keep going I love to read and this is very good. so far, well written!
That was my aim :D. Thanks a lot. U guys made my day
wow! tahts so good like it!
Thankyou! :D I'll try and do another chapter today
write another!
It looks good :D please make another chapter!
I've made the second chapter. What do u think? I'll try make another today :D
ANOTHERONE!
Of course! Wait for it..;)