Goodbye To The World
Formally titled Miss. Independent, and or goodbye to the world. I brought it back to finish it, the lost story of Mima Kain.
My hands will always be covered in blood.
I can't fix that fact.
I am not worthy of being saved.
I don't fight for anyone.
I don't know how to save a life.
I am Mima "Miss. Independent" "Raven" Kain.
Chapter 1
This Is Not My Place, I Must Leave
“Miss. Kain, you are now sentenced to death. That is your punishment for what you have done. I hope you now are happy from what you have done in your short life.”
I was the least bit happy. This was completely unfair. I had done just as much as the next guy.
“Miss. Kain, do you accept this punishment?” Silence.
“Miss. Kain?!”
That feeling was taking over. I closed my eyes, and felt it happen, my sword was right in front of me, in midair, and I grabbed it,
“I do not care what you sentence me to, it does not matter. You can see my scars. You try to pull me away from what I know is right. Now it is time for you to pay. Technique ritual five; Rain of blood!” I shouted. “You may have taken my family, and my friends, but you will not take me, not now, not ever!”
The room had exploded. There was smoke everywhere. Too much, I could not see anything, until the smoke cleared.
I had done it again.
No matter how hard I tried, my hands were always going to be covered in blood.
I was the least bit happy. This was completely unfair. I had done just as much as the next guy.
“Miss. Kain, do you accept this punishment?” Silence.
“Miss. Kain?!”
That feeling was taking over. I closed my eyes, and felt it happen, my sword was right in front of me, in midair, and I grabbed it,
“I do not care what you sentence me to, it does not matter. You can see my scars. You try to pull me away from what I know is right. Now it is time for you to pay. Technique ritual five; Rain of blood!” I shouted. “You may have taken my family, and my friends, but you will not take me, not now, not ever!”
The room had exploded. There was smoke everywhere. Too much, I could not see anything, until the smoke cleared.
I had done it again.
No matter how hard I tried, my hands were always going to be covered in blood.



17 Comments
Holy crap, when I saw the title, on the invite, I thought you were killing yourself! That scared the crap out of me! Anyway, good story!
hah me too
u scared me there
Did anybody else go "Oh, NO! Dont you go killing yourself on me!" I was scared out of my......crap!! Otherwise, it was a good story!
Omg me too! I had a rant prepared in my head XD
Awesome story, it's really interesting!
Wtf why only 2 comments? LOL... Well, yeah, I thought you were going to... NICE STORY :3
Waiitt a sec... I've already read this o.O Except for the last chapter?
agreed with I_am_the_spartan. That scared the living day out of me!
Yeah u scared me too :O
You scared the turd out of me :P I read the title and I was like "WHAT THE FLIP,????????"
how do i put in my fave?
On the right side, under where it says "rating". In that box it says "add to favourites", just click :)
Dx h thank God it was only a story title!! I was soooooo worried aother friend of mine would die. ;_;
oh goodness the title scare me but im ok now
it sounds really cool! i like it!!
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