Im in a depressing mood today for reasons...anyways I wrote this
Soul-less outcast
Emotions could cloud our minds with confusion
Turing our very bodies into living tourment
Sacraficing every joy we used to feel...
Take me away
To a place not meant for sorrow
Take me away
To a place where im not left to wonder in a world made
Of pain and agony
Take me...
No,save me...
From this world where im just a meare soul
Dancing around my sins
Ignored...
Alone...
Forgotten...
Save me
from being banished from society
Take me away
To a place where I feel like they could hear me
Save my already darkened heart from being crushed
Break me away
Where emotions like this never exist
Save me...the emo outcast
Emotions could cloud our minds with confusion
Turing our very bodies into living tourment
Sacraficing every joy we used to feel...
Take me away
To a place not meant for sorrow
Take me away
To a place where im not left to wonder in a world made
Of pain and agony
Take me...
No,save me...
From this world where im just a meare soul
Dancing around my sins
Ignored...
Alone...
Forgotten...
Save me
from being banished from society
Take me away
To a place where I feel like they could hear me
Save my already darkened heart from being crushed
Break me away
Where emotions like this never exist
Save me...the emo outcast
23 Comments
Niiiccceee.... great job! even though im not emo(i think) i like it. 5 stars for you.
5 stars. Hope you're feeling better.
SO NICE! :-)
Sorry, I didn't read your magnificent peom right away but it was very interesting. :)
*meant to say poem* :)
this is beautiful exactly how i feel
This is really cool, and definately how I feel. Ha if you don't listen to BVB then you should. Some of their songs have actually saved peoples lives when they were suicidal including mine.
This is a really good poem. I hope your life gets better.
very nice, i hope you feel better
Luv it!!!!!!!!