Just Why Is The Rum Always Gone? (a story of the 15 yr old jack sparrow)

I was running to the faithful bride, soaking wet to the bone from the thunder storm raging above my head. I slipped and fell into the mud, and picked my self up. I was trying to get out of the rain, and the closest place to go to, which is the faithful bride. I opend the door and went inside, and of course no one payede me any attention. I sat down and orderd a rum. Then when a giant clash of thunder and lightning a dark shadow enterd the room. It was a boy who was skinny and about the same age as me. He had black shaggy hair, and dark brown eyes. His clothes were oddish, he had a bright red bandana across his forehead, a dirty and coverd with mud shirt, pants ripped at the knee and a belt across his chest holding a small dagger. I looked him right in the eye and the dark brown eyes that met mine had a glint of lightning in them. He sat down and asked for rum. He stared at me for a few seconds and drank his rum. I looked down at my skirt, with bits of mud here and there, my old boots with a hole by the pinkie toe and my plain white shirt with a dark blue vest.
"Ahem...." the boy coughed. I smiled akwardly at him and he smiled back.
"I'm Jessie" i said to him.
"Jack." he replied back. He took a swig of his drink and payed the bartender. Then the lightning in his eyes light up and he got of his stool and went to where this gigantic man was sitting with a old sack underneath his chair. Oh no, a pickpocket i thought as he bent down and reached narrowly between the stool legs and his streched fingers grasped the end of the dirty old sack. He stood up and went for the door silently.
"You'll be giving me back that sack now boy." said a rasping voice belonging to the gigantic man, by the name of captian torrents.
"Uh... good sir...." said jack, thinking of a good reply to say to torrents. Torrents losing his patence took his raiper out and slashed at jack, but since jack ducked the raiper broke a chair which a tall pirate, fully armed stood up and he was obviously pissed. Then the two broke out in a fist fight and even more pirates joined and that started a brawl in the Faithful Bride. I saw so many men drawing their swords and slahing at each other. Others who didnt have a sword started fist fighting and Torrents was chasing jack around the room slashing at him and missing him by milimeters.
"AHH!" Jack screamed as torrents cut his shirt. Then Torrents chucked a chair and hit Jacks face and his nose started bleeding, and he fell down and he tried to scramble up but Torrents triped him down and just a few seconds before Torrents stabbed jack, i grabbed Jacks shirt collar and nearly choking him yanked him out of the way and dragged him outside into the pouring rain.