Demon Marker(not satanic)
So this is my first story and its for Zak's latest contest comment if you like it. If y'all do then I will keep it going after the contest is overwith. And so no one is confused I keeping it his name so y'all know when Zak comes into the story. And Zak's character is way younger than he is now.
I couldn't find a pic of Zak when he was younger so its some random dude I found on google images.
Hey,name is Celest. I will be fifteen in the fall. Right now I just begun summer vacation. I know most girls my age would be excited to be able to get out their bikinis and shades, especially here in L.A. but I'm a socially awkward person and hate the sun. So as I'm on my way home from hot topics shielded by my hoodie, I can sense him again. He is there in the shadows,watching my every move. Its the guy that killed my mom almost ten years ago, I just know it.
Dad tells me its just my imagination,but I see the worry etched into his face. I know its him because the FBI is back just like they were here last time. The papers don't know much besides his M.O. He tracks down six perfect women and follows them for months. Then he kills them on halloween drawing three sixes forming a spiral on their chests. So if its him I got about five and a half months to find this guy. I have got to get my hands on those files. Next thing I know I'm almost across the street when a car comes speeding towards me, but I get knocked out of the way at the last second. I look up to see…
A/N:comment please and tell me how you like it so far;D any sugestions?
Dad tells me its just my imagination,but I see the worry etched into his face. I know its him because the FBI is back just like they were here last time. The papers don't know much besides his M.O. He tracks down six perfect women and follows them for months. Then he kills them on halloween drawing three sixes forming a spiral on their chests. So if its him I got about five and a half months to find this guy. I have got to get my hands on those files. Next thing I know I'm almost across the street when a car comes speeding towards me, but I get knocked out of the way at the last second. I look up to see…
A/N:comment please and tell me how you like it so far;D any sugestions?
26 Comments
dude is this going to be like a Zak love story and he helps you find the dude?
You gunna have to wait and find out Brittany;D haha I may not be a magician but I still don't reveal my secrets;D.
I like it. =D
It's very interesting.
Thankyou
Cool :D
I love the cliffhanger. You should do that often. great so far!
Haha kay thanks and I got tha cliffhanger from a user on gotoquiz.com Firey_Soul she was always doing that with her story Paranormal Love kept me on the edge and drove me nuts! But I still loved it!
you're welcome! I didn't know you can write stories on there, I'll check it out.
Well technically its a storie that you can interact with as you read.
Awesome
thanx working on chapter2now
Omg Can't Wait
Haha gotta love clifhangers;D
HeHe. Yeah. So Your Into BVB
Hahascreams he//yeah!more like obsessed! Why are you?
Hell yeah. Im in love with them. :) Im also obsessed with BOTDF.
Ah! I love BOTDF to! Haha my2fav songs by them Sexting and LoveStruck
HaHa. I Love Innocent High And Miss Bipolar.
Haha I know right! Haha Jayy and tha guys from BVB SEXXIEST MEN IN THE UNIVERSE!
I Know Right. I'm Going To Marry Them One Day HeHe
Haha which one you want the most?
Andy From BVB and Jayy From BOTDF
Haha same here but Ash I s a close second;D
okay I get it now.
Amazing story, continue :)
haha thanxyou and I'm trying to work on the third chapter but that's the max amount for the contest so the fourth will have to wait til after the contest is over Friday.I got Beautiful Day-U2 onloop for inspiration;D