The Great Escape
5 teenagers are marooned on a mysterious private island with a huge mansion but no signs of life. What they find there will unfold a whole new mystery of its own.
Me
RedGoneBlue
INeedAnotherStory
The_Dormous
Wolves_Anonymous
Chapter 1
Zac Morris
The ferry rocked and creaked underneath my feet, and I staggered across deck. My blonde hair brushed my eyelids, and I flicked my head to get it back in its customary swoop. I wasn’t used to ships, and I never will be. Glancing into the main cabin, I saw the map of the water between Britain and France.
My family and close to half a dozen others were sailing to Britain on a National Geographic sweepstakes. My dad won it . . . I wouldn’t be caught dead with a magazine. I spent most of my times with sports anyways; football, lacrosse, baseball, and summer swim team. I had to miss a week of practices for this dumb trip my parents were making me attend.
A girl my age was leaning against the railing of the ship, and she had the most striking green eyes. I grinned cockily at her, and she blushed and looked away.
“All occupants on the ship please grab a life jacket. We are approaching choppy seas and would not like to take any risks.” The voice blaring over the loudspeaker sent chills down my spine.
“Life jackets? On a ferry?” The girl said, staring curiously out over the now foggy sea. Her voice was tinged with an Australian accent.
“I didn’t even know they had those.” I laughed, trying to appear cool and collected. We walked our opposite directions, and with a start I realized no one was above deck. The roiling fog was creeping ever so close to the ship, and I shivered again.
“Hello?” I heard a voice, but before I could react, there was the grating shriek of metal on stone. The ship lurched, and I pitched forward; cracking my head my head on the metal flooring.
When I woke up, I had water washing against my feet and 6 kids surrounding me. The Aussie from the ship grinned.
"Rise and shine and welcome to Hell Island."
My family and close to half a dozen others were sailing to Britain on a National Geographic sweepstakes. My dad won it . . . I wouldn’t be caught dead with a magazine. I spent most of my times with sports anyways; football, lacrosse, baseball, and summer swim team. I had to miss a week of practices for this dumb trip my parents were making me attend.
A girl my age was leaning against the railing of the ship, and she had the most striking green eyes. I grinned cockily at her, and she blushed and looked away.
“All occupants on the ship please grab a life jacket. We are approaching choppy seas and would not like to take any risks.” The voice blaring over the loudspeaker sent chills down my spine.
“Life jackets? On a ferry?” The girl said, staring curiously out over the now foggy sea. Her voice was tinged with an Australian accent.
“I didn’t even know they had those.” I laughed, trying to appear cool and collected. We walked our opposite directions, and with a start I realized no one was above deck. The roiling fog was creeping ever so close to the ship, and I shivered again.
“Hello?” I heard a voice, but before I could react, there was the grating shriek of metal on stone. The ship lurched, and I pitched forward; cracking my head my head on the metal flooring.
When I woke up, I had water washing against my feet and 6 kids surrounding me. The Aussie from the ship grinned.
"Rise and shine and welcome to Hell Island."



48 Comments
Amazing writing!!!
Is "The_Dormouse" still writing ? :O
I really don't think so. She's in a few of my other stories, and she hasn't written at all :/
Huh, okay, strange....
Maybe you could get someone else... or something? :\
I'll check!
... Dot Dot Dot ...
lol, I am so impatient :P
Me too! Wait, it's MY turn????? o.o
SHOOT GONNA GET STARTED
I am?
Who told you that?
True I had to drop some other stories, because
A. I was spreading myself too thin.
B. No inspiration.
and
C. I didn't have the time for them all!
But I am definitely not dropping this one.
Wait one sec. What person is yours?
Nvm, I got it. It just you deleted that account so I thought you were no longer active :D
Nice new chapters! ^.^ I'm curious to see where this is going. XD
This sounds like a great story forming. Can't wait for more!
Thanks for reading! :)
Keep writing. :)
Will do! ;)
Lovely new chapter! Very amusing and competitive. XD
next next :))