The Great Escape
5 teenagers are marooned on a mysterious private island with a huge mansion but no signs of life. What they find there will unfold a whole new mystery of its own.
Me
RedGoneBlue
INeedAnotherStory
The_Dormous
Wolves_Anonymous
Chapter 1
Zac Morris
The ferry rocked and creaked underneath my feet, and I staggered across deck. My blonde hair brushed my eyelids, and I flicked my head to get it back in its customary swoop. I wasn’t used to ships, and I never will be. Glancing into the main cabin, I saw the map of the water between Britain and France.
My family and close to half a dozen others were sailing to Britain on a National Geographic sweepstakes. My dad won it . . . I wouldn’t be caught dead with a magazine. I spent most of my times with sports anyways; football, lacrosse, baseball, and summer swim team. I had to miss a week of practices for this dumb trip my parents were making me attend.
A girl my age was leaning against the railing of the ship, and she had the most striking green eyes. I grinned cockily at her, and she blushed and looked away.
“All occupants on the ship please grab a life jacket. We are approaching choppy seas and would not like to take any risks.” The voice blaring over the loudspeaker sent chills down my spine.
“Life jackets? On a ferry?” The girl said, staring curiously out over the now foggy sea. Her voice was tinged with an Australian accent.
“I didn’t even know they had those.” I laughed, trying to appear cool and collected. We walked our opposite directions, and with a start I realized no one was above deck. The roiling fog was creeping ever so close to the ship, and I shivered again.
“Hello?” I heard a voice, but before I could react, there was the grating shriek of metal on stone. The ship lurched, and I pitched forward; cracking my head my head on the metal flooring.
When I woke up, I had water washing against my feet and 6 kids surrounding me. The Aussie from the ship grinned.
"Rise and shine and welcome to Hell Island."
My family and close to half a dozen others were sailing to Britain on a National Geographic sweepstakes. My dad won it . . . I wouldn’t be caught dead with a magazine. I spent most of my times with sports anyways; football, lacrosse, baseball, and summer swim team. I had to miss a week of practices for this dumb trip my parents were making me attend.
A girl my age was leaning against the railing of the ship, and she had the most striking green eyes. I grinned cockily at her, and she blushed and looked away.
“All occupants on the ship please grab a life jacket. We are approaching choppy seas and would not like to take any risks.” The voice blaring over the loudspeaker sent chills down my spine.
“Life jackets? On a ferry?” The girl said, staring curiously out over the now foggy sea. Her voice was tinged with an Australian accent.
“I didn’t even know they had those.” I laughed, trying to appear cool and collected. We walked our opposite directions, and with a start I realized no one was above deck. The roiling fog was creeping ever so close to the ship, and I shivered again.
“Hello?” I heard a voice, but before I could react, there was the grating shriek of metal on stone. The ship lurched, and I pitched forward; cracking my head my head on the metal flooring.
When I woke up, I had water washing against my feet and 6 kids surrounding me. The Aussie from the ship grinned.
"Rise and shine and welcome to Hell Island."



48 Comments
Awww. that chapter was cute. Can't wait for the next chapter!
you are an awesome writer! love your adjectives!
My dream yesterday was being shipwrecked on an island. Except it was a very small island. :P
That's weird!
There you are!
Sorry if it's a badly written.
I may have done it a little too fast.
It's fine I did mine the same way xD
You're amazing at writing! You have a really really good way of describing things. I just really wish you would do more original stories rather than fan-fictions, and I would read them all.
This is an Original :)
Thanks! And this is an original :))
This is really great!! (:
Haha, I love Sam, in a like/hate sort of way :P
She is so... Sam-ish... lol
Please keep going! (:
Cool!!!! I always love your stories!
Thanks!! :)
Love it! Very exciting!
Gracias! Thanks for reading! :)
You're welcome! I hope Gift of Six is the next update...>:)
I love your stories.
Me encanta comer las vacas.
That means, 'I've finished my chapter', in Spanish :)
Actually it translates to, "I love to eat cows."
Just pointing that out.
That's hilarious xD