Suicide.
Noo, i'm not going to kill myself. This is just one of the many poems I wrote when I was in school going through some major drama.
Coming back to this place is suicide,
finishing the words that are left to say,
Your going to rip my heart out and suffacate me,
But you already killed my better half,
So there's nothing left but suicide,
life just a record held on replay,
We've already done this once don't you see,
You stabbed me in the back with your mighty staff,
You just helped me out with my suicide.
finishing the words that are left to say,
Your going to rip my heart out and suffacate me,
But you already killed my better half,
So there's nothing left but suicide,
life just a record held on replay,
We've already done this once don't you see,
You stabbed me in the back with your mighty staff,
You just helped me out with my suicide.
14 Comments
it's really good and sad at the same time! :(
Thank you :)
Yea, I know.
thats an awesome poem and im glad you didnt kill yourself back in the old days and pulled through the rough. just shows us all how strong you are inside. :)
Thank you :)
So am I. Lifes not easy for anyone. Everybody has their own challenges to go through, some times it just takes time for wounds to heal.
Thank you for commenting.
great writing! :) but sooo sad :'( so glad ur not planning on killing urself tho!!! :D
P.S. gave it 5 stars ;)
Im glad you like it :)
Thank you so much :D
5 starrrrs :D
Thank you ^_^
Wicked poem!!!!!! :D
Thank you xD
wow! im shocked! so good!! 5 stars 4 this!
Thank you :)
you're a really good poet. thanks for not killing yourself. i considered it once... my best friend/boyfriend moved away... i havn't seen him in eight months. haven't talked to him. his birthday was wensday.... x'(