Why does everyone have a crush on my brother?(a 1D fanfic)
Hey dudes and dudets
I know another one but I'm doing this one with
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Enjoy:D
"I wanna watch cupcake wars"I complained
"but I wanna watch spongebob"said Liam
"mr.Payne since when did lady's not come first"
"since forever in my world "
I dived for the remote
"give it to me"I shouted
"no"he shouted back
DING DONG
"the bell ill get it "I shouted
I ran to the door
"CHLOE"I shoute to my best friend
"HARPER"she shouted back I hugged her and invited her in
"so where meeting the one direction today "she asked
"Yes"I squealed
Chloe ran in to Liam
"oh you like sponge bob to I....."Chloe chatted to Liam for about half an hour until the bell rung again
"I'll get it"I screamed I went to the door and answered it and I swear I almost fainted
"C-C-Chloe "I shouted
She came running over and she froze beside me
"Chloe one direction are at my door"I whispered
"I know"she whispered back
"come on in lads"shouted Liam from the sitting room
They all crammed into the sitting room and say down
I clossed the door and walked in after them
"hi"I said to Louis
"hi "he replied
"marry me"he said
"em no"I answered I practically backed away and sat beside Niall
He started talking to me about different kinds of patatoes
"So boys do you want to stay at are place for are brack"asked Liam
"yaAaaa"they all chorused
"hey can I stay to asked Chloe
"ya"I replied
"Harper your sharing a room with Niall and Chloe "said Liam
"oh boy"
"but I wanna watch spongebob"said Liam
"mr.Payne since when did lady's not come first"
"since forever in my world "
I dived for the remote
"give it to me"I shouted
"no"he shouted back
DING DONG
"the bell ill get it "I shouted
I ran to the door
"CHLOE"I shoute to my best friend
"HARPER"she shouted back I hugged her and invited her in
"so where meeting the one direction today "she asked
"Yes"I squealed
Chloe ran in to Liam
"oh you like sponge bob to I....."Chloe chatted to Liam for about half an hour until the bell rung again
"I'll get it"I screamed I went to the door and answered it and I swear I almost fainted
"C-C-Chloe "I shouted
She came running over and she froze beside me
"Chloe one direction are at my door"I whispered
"I know"she whispered back
"come on in lads"shouted Liam from the sitting room
They all crammed into the sitting room and say down
I clossed the door and walked in after them
"hi"I said to Louis
"hi "he replied
"marry me"he said
"em no"I answered I practically backed away and sat beside Niall
He started talking to me about different kinds of patatoes
"So boys do you want to stay at are place for are brack"asked Liam
"yaAaaa"they all chorused
"hey can I stay to asked Chloe
"ya"I replied
"Harper your sharing a room with Niall and Chloe "said Liam
"oh boy"
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Ah thanks! Oh btw one of the writers here! I'm suppose to be chloe! Thanks for reading! :)
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