poem
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the sadness fills me every day
i cant seem to keep the darkness away
happiness is rare
i just cant bear
the aching
i dont know why
i want to cry
i cant even get this poem right
i must confess
i feel depressed
why cant i just be happy?
i cant seem to keep the darkness away
happiness is rare
i just cant bear
the aching
i dont know why
i want to cry
i cant even get this poem right
i must confess
i feel depressed
why cant i just be happy?
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I liked it but it was really sad:'(
It was rather depressing. But still good!
thx
i like it
do u want to talk about ur depression or whats wrong
no not really but thanks and actually i dont know whats wrong
I know how u feel. These poems describe exactly how i feel as well. Only i actually feel happiness sometimes. Its just rare....
oh i feel happy its just that like it barely comes and when it does it lasts like an hour and a half
ur welcome
and oh
This looks like something I might write i like it but it's really sad.
You are a very good writer. I really like your poems so please keep writing more. :)
These are amazing! (Sad but still amazing) I could never write a poem this well. I don't normally like poems but I loved these!
ko! i have a second poem collection, just look in my creations!
Why does Another poem say all life is is pain