Poem 2: The Unexplained.
Uhm, well, I got positive feedback from my first poem so I decided to write another one. I'm open to crituiqe! Please tell me how I could improve in any way!!
When something happens.
That you can't explain.
Do you look for answers?
Do you ask for help?
Or do you lay there.
Looking into the distance.
As your mind figures it out.
That you can't explain.
Do you look for answers?
Do you ask for help?
Or do you lay there.
Looking into the distance.
As your mind figures it out.
15 Comments
Ooooo, I like it!! ;D
I think I like this one even better than your last one actually! ;]
Thanks so much, I was never really into poetry, but, I guess ill spend part of my summer on it.
hm... let me think...
short, sweet, and to the point. :)
I bEgAn to tHinK LOL!! xD
AWESOME!! Your a natural!!!!!!! XD
Thanks!!
No probs!! Keep going it could get you somewhere one day! (not saying that your not good or anything i think your AWESOME and also not saying your not anywhere in life XD)
^_^
Gosh, Emil.
Ah, yeah, im inspired.
there's a hidden william wordsworth in u.
Oh, thats too nice!!
Rhetorical? Yes.
Answer: Ask later!
XD Nive poem!
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rhetorical? Yes.
Answer: Ask later!
XD Nive poem!