Poem 4: The Waste.
Well, people liked my first three poems, so I'm back with another! I don't know, my creative influence is going totally crazy. I'm always open to crituiqe. Enjoy!!
An untold story.
An uneaten meal.
An unworn shirt.
The waste.
But the worst thing that could happen.
Is a brilliant mind.
Stripped from the world.
Far too soon.
That is the real waste.
An uneaten meal.
An unworn shirt.
The waste.
But the worst thing that could happen.
Is a brilliant mind.
Stripped from the world.
Far too soon.
That is the real waste.
19 Comments
That was really deep, and way too true for words. Good job. I don't even know what else to say. This one is my favorite.
Keep Writing.
Thanks kal, did u see my location,did you get invited to the quibblo party? y u no answer my phone calls!? XD
Thanks kal, did u see my location,did you get invited to the quibblo party? y u no answer my phone calls!? XD
Awww, I love it!! ;)
And, yeah, keep writing!! ;D
Aw, thanks mariah!!
Deep in tranquility, very well done.
Thanks!!
ALDFJA;D
Sorry about that, my laptop was going insane and it wouldn't post my comment. Anyways, I did see your location, check mine out! I think I did, I am in the process of going through my sea of messages right now. I soooowwwy! I will find and charge my phone now!
Y U No make more meme jokes?
hehe
Love it!! and its True i know someone who had an amazing mind and personality well they were perfect but they got taking away!
Aw, sad, sorry if i invoked any memories, :(
Its okay i was thinking bout it already! Only happened last Friday!
Aw, sorry. :'(
Its okay, not your fault :D
hey, upcoming william wardsworth, keep writing poems!
awesome!
K. Thanks. :)
Nicely true!
Um, thanks I think. ;)