Poem 5: The paper story.
Um, back with poem 5. This one is more lighthearted than my others. Oh, and for anyone who was wondering, I get my ideas from laying in bed. When I get an idea, I scramble around for paper and a pen so I don't forget it. XD Oh, almost forgot my trademark, I'm always open to crituiqe. Enjoy!!
You open it.
You're eyes traveling.
You sit down with it.
You're eyes more intense.
You turn the paper.
Over and over.
Until you're done, satisfied.
"What was that?" I ask.
"A good book" You softly reply.
You're eyes traveling.
You sit down with it.
You're eyes more intense.
You turn the paper.
Over and over.
Until you're done, satisfied.
"What was that?" I ask.
"A good book" You softly reply.
23 Comments
just one word, WOW!
Thanks, did you like it?
that's so sweet!! i love how good words can turn a stack of paper into a book :)
i also come up with a lotta poems when i'm lying in bed XD
Thanks, send me one!!
yeah it's awesome!
Thanks!!
WOW...awesome :))
thank you!!
nice!
AHHH!!! I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!
I get my ideas laying in bed also. That's when all my best stories come into my head...then, and also when I'm sitting outside or looking out the window ;)
^_^
You are amazing, just thought you should know.....
NATE IS MOVING NEXT WEEK. I AM DEVASTATED.
Оh, you should be devasted, but at least noones gonna be super depressed anymore.
Okay i LOVED the rest but this is my favourite! Keep going!!
I really love it! You're such a good poet! :)
Aw, thanks Soph. Do you like poetry?
No problem Em :)
Some of it. Most of it. Ones written by you, definitely.
Aw, thanks, sniffle Im touched. ;)