Bloog red and Glittering Gold ( harry potter love story)

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Sorry, i tried to post this a few days ago but quibblo wiped the story.

this may have some typo's that im sorry for if you find them

Chapter 1

Weclome to Hogwarts

Wow you think and u walk thought wall to get to the platform, you look at professor McGonagall and she looks at you as she opens her mouth to talk you know it serious
“Your parents were in my house she said Gryffindor I hope you happy here I now this must hurt but as they are now dead there can’t home schooled you so the wrote in the will you are to go to Hogwarts your joining the 4th year, there all your age this that ok...”

You’re still dazed as you walk on to the train. You ignore the glossy red pain and the warm confortable lights, you walk in the first empty compartment you see and just sit, after about 10 min of crying. You being to feel really proud of them and then happy they died killing as Meany death eaters as they could, it was a good way to go, getting rid of evil you smile just as a guy with jet black hair and green eyes looks down at you.

“Can I sit here”? HE WAS SO CUTE!
“Sure” you try not to sound to Eger and notice it not working, woops
It turn out he was harry potter, the harry potter the boy how lived and all that jazz but you never really got why celebrities are different so you just talked like normal people he seem shocked that your eyes didn’t go to his forehead, but stayed lock on his eyes. As you thought this a boy your age with a flameful of hair walk in and sat with you.
He said his name was Ron, he seem ok but kept going on about some football team some cuddly cannons or something you were zooning out, it was boy talk, you could never keep upon with sport talk, but then Ron asked about you mother and your father, so you did something you never did, talk about it and just let it sink in, as your cried Harrys arms were around you when a voice
“So your name” a boy was looking at me and though the teary and bulged mass of water an eyeliner I could make a pale face and really annoying smirk
“I’m Alice; I don't know I haven’t about a house yet”.
“U cutie want to be in Sytherin don't you” The new boy asked with his pale skin and white blonde hair he didn't look to bad now you blinked the burliness out your eyes, he was Draco, he sat down right next to you lent over you and want to harry, you found his ignorant and ‘I’m the best thing ever’ kind of ego really annoying
“This your girlfriend potter”
“Not yet” you looked at harry in with shook on your face what was his boy talking about you had only met few minutes ago, The two boys just stared at each other, hated filling the eyes and still giving harry a ‘if looks could kill’ glare, Draco put his arm around you with this smirk on his face you just wanted to cruse off his face, and told you that some wizarding family were better that others, the purer the better he said you look at him pull his arm off of you.
“That racism” you look and him with your evilest stare “And I don't like it, my mum always used to say Gryffindor’s were brave and bold I want to be with them, reds my fave colour.”
You were now stood up with harry right next to you. He hugged you form the side has you mention your mom; a tear slowly ran down your face so he wiped it off carefully like he’ll mark you.
The two boys looked at each other with the look of two bull about to charge but this time harry looked triumphant not worried
“Not yet, Malfoy” harry said added as Malfoy turned around and left the harry yelled
“Soon will be though”
You turn and hit sharply in the gut.
“What the for"
"Being a D***"
“Hey us Gryffindor’s have to stay together right we haven’t we"
After an hour or 2 a girl came in, her name was Hermione granger are she seem really cleaver she was in the golden gang as ‘Snape’ puts it.
“Why though” Ron asked to 8 times, after I let slip Ravenclaw sound good to
“I said that or Gryffindor I will never be in sytherin.”
As you left the train you spied Draco talking to some really ugly girl.
"I think you may have beef (hate) for Malfoy “you whisper.
“You don’t say” harry tone was coloured in sarcasm.
You just L0L really loud at this and even one looked at you and harry, mostly at harry arm around you ,blush built up in to neck and filled you face till you look like berry.as he helped u off the train u think u herd harry speak to Draco but you didn't hear what he said.
"care to tell me why" you wisperd in a way to get a wrong inpression to staring at his pale face

"Alice smith"The professor McGonagall said your name you look at harry and Ron look up and you form the Gryffindor table

After 20 mins of the hat mumbling about sytherin and Gryffindor you look at harry and your heart jumps.
"You choose the hat said you fit in both of the houses perfectly"
“Uummm, Gryffindor” you say with a bit of a nod.
"GRFFINDOOR”
As you run to the house. You brush pass Draco, who whispered as you went pass
"Why me"
You look at him seeing the hrt and oain in his eyes, and then run over to harry. You end up sitting next to him and Hermione.
A prof with really greasy hair and a smirk walk over to you. Harry and Ron look like they wanted a gun, and to pull the trigger, hate didn’t cover it,
“Alice Smith”
“She here Snape” harry said
“Wasn’t talking to u potter”
Snape hits you on the head (a bit hard then he should) with his wand and then your plain robe become Gryffindor even you sliver hair ribbon was now a golden reddish colour.
The hole of the gang around you clap really load and then you all back you goblets in celebration, you look behind you and see Draco looking like his about to cry.
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You look at you clock it read 7.15 breakfast starts in 15 mins you think while jumping around the room like a kargoo on a few pills. You take the quickest shower known to man, and while pulling you soaking wet mass melted chocolate hair up in a ponytail , leaving the girls dorm without think your run straight through the door in front of you and keep running up the stairs, the stairs just kept coming 6 flights, 7 flights later you herd someone running around in one of the rooms as you open the door, Harry’s topless self is running around the dorm, you stand and let your eyes run over the abbs, that seemed to just get bigger and bigger , soon you herd a yelp, looking to to harry eyes you found yourself lost and wondering around the green, grass like colour.
“Your rooms that way _”he sound really shy,the sound made you look at the rest of his face, it was that sweetest shade of pink, and as you looked at him get got to higher stages of red.
“I err got lost” you muttered keeping your very face pink and your green eyes lowered “I thought the main hall was up here”
“Walk with me” he mumbled pulling a his uniform over his head and calming down a little “no point going fast were later all ready”

You and harry become good friend on the way to the hall the 5 minute walk, would always become one the moment you held dear with him. You told harry about losing them you mum, and a few days later you dad. You told him about how you were home schooled and your owl, glitters, and how you dad put a spell on him to make him shine and glitter when he flew. But then you stopped at the door.
“Everyone’s going to look, i hate people looking at me like I’m weird or wrong ...” you had a full on panic attack, you hate big crowds of people looking at you but harry simply held your hand, the touch of it sent shiver through your body and tingled , and burned up your skin. As you thought every in hall turned to look at you, Draco’s eyes were locked your hand, looking down you noticed a tingle and a warmness as harry put your hand in his

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