black bullet

black bullet

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this is the first story i have put up here so it probably sucks and i am going to need atleast three people to like it for me to continue the story so please comment and be honest! these are real places in new zealand (where i come from) if you haven't heard of them look it up it is an awesome place!

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Chapter 1

mike's side of the story

i got home from school and got some food and went up stairs into my bedroom and put my music up really loud. about an hour later my someone knocked on my door i thought it was to tell me to turn my music down cos they were watching tv. 'come in' i yelled over the music my mum came in 'come downstairs.' she said with a look on her face that i didn't recognize. 'why?' i asked even though i knew i wasn't going to get a proper answer.'because.'my mum said. see told you. when we got downstairs my mum told me to sit down at the table my dad was there. there was a silence then my dad said 'we're moving' he always did get to the point. 'what!? why? where!?' i said astonished. 'we are moving because i think we need to get out of Tai Tapu and i have a new teaching job it would be like a new start.' that was my mum. 'where?' i asked again. 'to akaroa, well barry's bay its a bit outside of akaroa, its not that far away only about a 45 minute drive.' 'do we have to i really don't wanna move again' i moaned. 'no we are going and that is final'. i grabbed my jacket and went out the door i needed to go for a walk to think 'where are you going?'my mum asked 'for a walk' i replied. i walked and walked till about a half later i got hungry and i realized that there was the cafe just over the road so i got a drink and a pie i finished the pie so i started walking again i walked past the hall by the pre-school and i heard some music so i walked up to the window and saw a ballet class with black leotards and black skirts, they were all about 16 or 17. the music stopped and the tallest took her hair out of her pony tail and retied it. she was pretty with nice long black curly hair, she had pale skin and the most beautiful green eyes i had ever seen. when she finished tying her hair back up she looked up and saw me she and smiled a cheerful smile. she was lonely all the other girls had there own groups and were chatting away while she was there just doing her own thing an young women came through a door and said something. they all rushed to a different part of the room and music started i watched them dance she was the best at it but hardly got noticed. they finished the dance i looked at the time it was getting late i had better get going. i started the walk back home. when i got home i realized something when i waved good bye her eyes weren't green unlike when i first saw her they were blood red

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akaroa, banks peninsula, NZ

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