Random Story I wrote for Creative writing that my teacher hate

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I wrote this story for Creative Writing in class, today and my teacher literally told me it sucked, so I thought I would share it with u all :)

Chapter 1

Jay the teleporter

Once upon a time there was a kid named Jay. Jay loved watching movies ,but that's not important in this particular story. One day Jay developed supernatural powers. She was so excited. She could teleport anywhere she wanted, as long as she'd been there before. Otherwise bad things happened. So she teleported to and from school, everyday. One day however, she wanted to teleport to Japan, but she'd never been there before. She was scared so she sent her hamster first, then teleported it back to her (because she could do that). All that was left of it thought was big red mush. BLOOD! Jay decided NO JAPAN! Si the one day Jay was being chased by bullies who thought she was a freak for teleporting. So she teleported them to Japan. The bullies were never seen again. Jay, distraught over what she did, cried and cried but, the next day she still teleported to school....in JAPAN! Jay was never seen again either. THE END!

*(Idk i thought it was pretty creative considering i came up with it on the spot).

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