The Strength To Say Goodbye
When I first saw you, I was afraid to meet you
When I first met you, I was afraid to kiss you
When I first kissed you, I was afraid to love you
But now that I love you...
I'm afraid to lose you
Anthony
"Elena, stop!" I said, running towards the end of the roof. Her long brown hair swam in the cool wind as she looked over the balcony of a 30 story building. I ran to her, but she turned around and held up a gun. I stopped. Her eyes were sad and her voice was weak as she spoke.
"Don't come any closer Anthony, or I'll shoot you." She said, her voice quivering. My girlfriend had just threatened to kill me. I held up my hands and stopped. Elena's dark purple eyes shone with fresh tears.
"Elena..." I said, almost crying myself. "Why are you doing this? Please, don't jump, I'll do anything..." I said, my voice rising in panic. She just smiled at me.
"One day you'll understand Anthony." She looked down. "One day, we'll meet again." She took a backwards step closer to the edge, and I heard someone scream from below. The tears escaped and I took a step closer. Her hand tightened on the gun, but she didn't raise it.
"Elena..." I said, barely able to talk. "I don't want to lose you. Not like this." My voice broke. She smiled again and more tears streamed down her beautiful face.
"Like I said, we'll meet again." She closed her eyes. "Goodbye Anthony. I love you." She said. Elena leaned backward and let herself fall.
So what do you think? I promise the other chapters won't be nearly this short. Leave comments and suggestions below! :D
"Elena, stop!" I said, running towards the end of the roof. Her long brown hair swam in the cool wind as she looked over the balcony of a 30 story building. I ran to her, but she turned around and held up a gun. I stopped. Her eyes were sad and her voice was weak as she spoke.
"Don't come any closer Anthony, or I'll shoot you." She said, her voice quivering. My girlfriend had just threatened to kill me. I held up my hands and stopped. Elena's dark purple eyes shone with fresh tears.
"Elena..." I said, almost crying myself. "Why are you doing this? Please, don't jump, I'll do anything..." I said, my voice rising in panic. She just smiled at me.
"One day you'll understand Anthony." She looked down. "One day, we'll meet again." She took a backwards step closer to the edge, and I heard someone scream from below. The tears escaped and I took a step closer. Her hand tightened on the gun, but she didn't raise it.
"Elena..." I said, barely able to talk. "I don't want to lose you. Not like this." My voice broke. She smiled again and more tears streamed down her beautiful face.
"Like I said, we'll meet again." She closed her eyes. "Goodbye Anthony. I love you." She said. Elena leaned backward and let herself fall.
So what do you think? I promise the other chapters won't be nearly this short. Leave comments and suggestions below! :D
41 Comments
Wow.Really good start! Pretty sad though. :'(
Thanks :)
O.O This is AMAZING!!!!!!!
Thanks XD
Aww, poor Anthony. But you should write more!!!!
I know I feel so bad for him! And don't worry, I'm working on a new chapter as we speak :D
Sounds really good! Poor Alec...
Yeah I feel so bad for him :(
OMG you scared me to death! When I got the invitation I thought you were deleting!! D':
But now I know it's just one of your many amazing stories ;)
It's so sad!! :'(
It's weird 'cause I only know 1 Anthony so I can't help imagining him like that, it's bizarre :P
NO I'LL NEVER DELETE!!!!!!!!!! Deleting means that I would leave all of my wonderful friends, like you!!!! And thank you, you always give me the greatest compliments I could ever ask for :)
Awww you're such a great friend! You mean a lot to me!! :)
That's the reason why I stay on Quibblo too!! =D for all those wonderul people like you!! :)
I like it :D
Thankies :3
Great chapter again.
Thank you :3
This is awesome!!
Thank you kindly :P
Again,absoult-aflippen-MAZING!!!!
Thank you so so so so so much!!!!! XD
Wow! This is really good!!
Thank you, thank you very much :D