S.U.I.C.I.D.E. (original poem~PLEASE READ~)
Hehehe, bet it's different from what you think it'd be lol
Chapter 1
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S is for sorrow
Which you feel so deeply
Sorrowful nights, replacing nights of laughter and joy
Sorrowful days, causing a darkened haze to creep over the one who was once so happy
U is for umbrella
Figurative of course
For you need something to shield you from the storm
The storm of hate and sorrow
Engulfing you deeper
You need something to shield you forever
I is for Intensity
The intense pain in your heart
Swallowing you up slowly
C is for care
Which you need someone to do
I care deeply for you
Not many others will even look at us
But don't you see that I care
I care.
Care
I is for ignorace
Because they are ignorant of everything
They know not your pain
Or your sorrow
Which they have only intensified
Ignorant enemies
Breaking you down inside
D is for death
Which you want so bad
Didn't you tell me that you did not want to die?
Only to be saved?
Saved from the pain
From the sorrow
The hate
Death is not the answer dear friend
Can I be your saviour?
E is for Eternity
For I will be here forever
By your side
Watching you cry
As we walk towards ther gates of heaven
Heaven on earth
What I attempt to make true
failing you so deeply I feel as if my heart would bleed
E is for eternity
Which I will spend forever with you
My sister
And twin
Eternity is not long enough for this.
Which you feel so deeply
Sorrowful nights, replacing nights of laughter and joy
Sorrowful days, causing a darkened haze to creep over the one who was once so happy
U is for umbrella
Figurative of course
For you need something to shield you from the storm
The storm of hate and sorrow
Engulfing you deeper
You need something to shield you forever
I is for Intensity
The intense pain in your heart
Swallowing you up slowly
C is for care
Which you need someone to do
I care deeply for you
Not many others will even look at us
But don't you see that I care
I care.
Care
I is for ignorace
Because they are ignorant of everything
They know not your pain
Or your sorrow
Which they have only intensified
Ignorant enemies
Breaking you down inside
D is for death
Which you want so bad
Didn't you tell me that you did not want to die?
Only to be saved?
Saved from the pain
From the sorrow
The hate
Death is not the answer dear friend
Can I be your saviour?
E is for Eternity
For I will be here forever
By your side
Watching you cry
As we walk towards ther gates of heaven
Heaven on earth
What I attempt to make true
failing you so deeply I feel as if my heart would bleed
E is for eternity
Which I will spend forever with you
My sister
And twin
Eternity is not long enough for this.



13 Comments
This is really good... Makes me remember when I felt/feel like that.. very touching..
You put this in the Diary of Imperfection right?
Either way, it's beautiful C.J. :) One of the best things I've ever written.
Yes I did.
Thanks!!! But I didn't work toohard on this....Hehehe, but I like it.
This is amazing :')
luv it
luv it,i always write poems
I've been there too many times. Beautiful poem. You have some talent :)
Thanks. That almost made me cry because that's excatly what I feel like right now.
Same here!
dude, i love it
This. Is. Amazing. o.O How do you even write these things? They're phenomenal!
AWESOME