Get Thru This ~ Chap 13, plz read
I did come up with these poems by myself
No, I don't cut myself
No, I don't think of commiting suicide
And yes, these poems are how I really feel
Chapter 1
Fade
They say to sleep away the sadness of today
But you can't even close your eyes
Every second like a month
Every month like a year
You lay wrapped in the sheets
your own personal coffin
afraid, alone,cold
The darkness looms over you
and slowly takes away your sanity
You stare at the ceiling
eyes wide, barly breathing
Every thought like a dagger
And as the lights start to fade
so do I



36 Comments
Wow that was pretty deep.
luved it
thanks :)
ya I write poetry but its never that good
Really? I love your poetry!
I think mine are kinda stupid -_-'
Na not at all its real good
oh an thanks
Im not much of a poet myself but i know enough to tell this is a beautiful meaningful poem :) It's really good :)
THANKS!!!!!!!! :')
Wow that was good. I cant write poetry at all because I end up writeing stupid stuff!^.^
Woooooooah.
Did you write this?
Woooooooooooah. WAY good.
I dids write this :D
Gracias!!!!!!!!!!
I'm jealous that you can write poetry better than I can. :P Really good :)
the last one was sad but explained depression well.
thanks :)