Waiting for Tomorow (a poem...)
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Chapter 1
A Poem
When I first met you, you were shy.
No one noticed you, as you'd pass by.
When you first met me, I had a smile.
I hoped we could sit and talk for a while.
We sat.
We chat.
Though, I talked more.
Hopeing you'd talk too, hoping I wasnt a bore.
And as we talked, something turned true.
I loved you, and you loved me, too.
You're like my brother, Im like your sis.
Then something happened that I had missed.
By then, I learned you had to go.
My dear friends, I miss you so.
We talked once more, my heart full of sorrow,
You said you had to go, and we'd talk tomorow.
Im still wating, dear friend,
And all wait till the end
Untill then my heart is numb.
Forever in my sorrow.
Forever waiting for tomorow.
Though tomorow will never come...
~Eva
No one noticed you, as you'd pass by.
When you first met me, I had a smile.
I hoped we could sit and talk for a while.
We sat.
We chat.
Though, I talked more.
Hopeing you'd talk too, hoping I wasnt a bore.
And as we talked, something turned true.
I loved you, and you loved me, too.
You're like my brother, Im like your sis.
Then something happened that I had missed.
By then, I learned you had to go.
My dear friends, I miss you so.
We talked once more, my heart full of sorrow,
You said you had to go, and we'd talk tomorow.
Im still wating, dear friend,
And all wait till the end
Untill then my heart is numb.
Forever in my sorrow.
Forever waiting for tomorow.
Though tomorow will never come...
~Eva



18 Comments
aww,this is sad! :(
Yeah... Its dedicated to a friend I probbly wount hear from again untill we're dead...
eva...its so sad....whos it for?
Its for one of my friends who I'll probly never hear from again untill the the afterlife...
who?
You wouldnt know them...
:'(
This is... aw.......... . :(
Aww... ):
wow that was an amazing poem
... Thanks... ^^'
ur welcome :) and by amazing i meant it really brought out emotion
Thats beautiful! I loved it but it was sad
... I'm glad you liked it.
Beautiful and Deep....I read the other comments as well. I'm sorry for your loss.
Thanks... Im glad you liked it...