Thinking Of You (another poem)
I think my first one is better, but I like this one too.
(If your wondering why it looks like THAT its because quibblo was being a jackass.
Whensomeonesays"hi",Ithinkofyou.
Whensomeoneactsshy,Istartfeelingblue.
Everythingremindsmeofustwo.
EverythingyouandIusedtodo.
WhyisitthatIfeelthisway?
Mymind'sdriftingfurthereveryday.
Asifitwasntalreadyfarenoughaway.
... Maybeit'sbecause... youdidntstay...?
Whyisit,thatthoughItry,
Icantletthememoriesofyouslipby?
Itrymyhardesttokeepthetearsbehindmyeyes.
Thoughitwasyouwhotoldmeitwasalrighttocry.
Istayawakeforhoursatnight.
Icantsleepwiththefeelingoffright.
Yournothereanymoretomakethingsalright.
Ifallasleepwithmychestfeelingtight.
Seeingmedepressedissomethingyoudread.
So,fornow,foryou,I'lltrynottoseered.
I'lltrytofeelaliveinside,instedoffeelingdead.
I'lltrytokeepthingshappy,insidemyinsanehead.
ImissourGardianAngel,aswell.
Yourgriefmatchesmine,nowIcantell.
Butyourhappinesswasoneyoucouldsell,
Iboughtit,too,thoughminefell.
Imissyou,myfriend,andthosetimeswetalkedtogether.
Brotherandsister,youandI,twobirdsofafeather.
Thosemomentsthatwehadnothingcouldweather.
Thebondthatweshare,nobodycansever.
Yourmybrother.
Imyoursister.
Twobirdsofafeather.
Yourmybrother...
Imyoursister...
... Justtwobirdsofafeather...
Whensomeoneactsshy,Istartfeelingblue.
Everythingremindsmeofustwo.
EverythingyouandIusedtodo.
WhyisitthatIfeelthisway?
Mymind'sdriftingfurthereveryday.
Asifitwasntalreadyfarenoughaway.
... Maybeit'sbecause... youdidntstay...?
Whyisit,thatthoughItry,
Icantletthememoriesofyouslipby?
Itrymyhardesttokeepthetearsbehindmyeyes.
Thoughitwasyouwhotoldmeitwasalrighttocry.
Istayawakeforhoursatnight.
Icantsleepwiththefeelingoffright.
Yournothereanymoretomakethingsalright.
Ifallasleepwithmychestfeelingtight.
Seeingmedepressedissomethingyoudread.
So,fornow,foryou,I'lltrynottoseered.
I'lltrytofeelaliveinside,instedoffeelingdead.
I'lltrytokeepthingshappy,insidemyinsanehead.
ImissourGardianAngel,aswell.
Yourgriefmatchesmine,nowIcantell.
Butyourhappinesswasoneyoucouldsell,
Iboughtit,too,thoughminefell.
Imissyou,myfriend,andthosetimeswetalkedtogether.
Brotherandsister,youandI,twobirdsofafeather.
Thosemomentsthatwehadnothingcouldweather.
Thebondthatweshare,nobodycansever.
Yourmybrother.
Imyoursister.
Twobirdsofafeather.
Yourmybrother...
Imyoursister...
... Justtwobirdsofafeather...
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A continuation of my poem, "Waiting For Tomorow"...
nice =) That was a really interesting format with the bolding of words.
^^" thanks. Its like that cuz Quibblo said there were "inapropriate" words in it. I couldnt fix it. So i made it like that.
that was a really goood ! this may sound stupid but is this about your brother ?
Thanks. And, no, Its about a guy that I love thats like my brother.
It's a very sweet and adorable poem. =)
very sweet ^-^ beautiful poem :]
tho it describes how i feel...and so does Waiting for Tomorrow...
you didnt steal my diary, did you? and read it? XD
Lol xD .... Maybe.... JK!!!! No I didnt steal your diary! :D These are just poems I come up with from the resesses of my imagenation mixed with emotion. :3
very sweet ^-^ beautiful poem :]
tho it describes how i feel...and so does Waiting for Tomorrow...
you didnt steal my diary, did you? and read it? XD
That must have been a lot of asterisks. |D
Beautiful, just beautiful