Omg...I Wrote A Poem!
Normally I don't care much for poetry, but...well I had this circling around in my head and I thought I'd give it a shot and see what happened...this is the result. Thoughts?
So long I was lost,
unseen and unheard.
Just a broken girl
Who never said a word.
Now I'm crying out,
but nobody hears.
I'm begging for help
yet no one sees my tears.
My voice is strong,
I will be heard.
I'm here right now,
so listen to my words.
I'm more than just a girl, a face in the crowd.
There's more in this world, I'm screaming out loud.
I'm through being invisible, done hiding my face.
I'm not invincible, but I can be brave.
Now I'm singing out, my voice loud and sure,
I can't be stopped now, I will endure.
unseen and unheard.
Just a broken girl
Who never said a word.
Now I'm crying out,
but nobody hears.
I'm begging for help
yet no one sees my tears.
My voice is strong,
I will be heard.
I'm here right now,
so listen to my words.
I'm more than just a girl, a face in the crowd.
There's more in this world, I'm screaming out loud.
I'm through being invisible, done hiding my face.
I'm not invincible, but I can be brave.
Now I'm singing out, my voice loud and sure,
I can't be stopped now, I will endure.
13 Comments
I love it! :D Every good is this your 1st poem?
Thanks!!! :3
And no, but it is the first one I ever did that wasn't for an assignment...so basically it's the first one I ever did that really had meaning to me
Thanks!!! :3
And no, but it is the first one I ever did that wasn't for an assignment...so basically it's the first one I ever did that really had meaning to me.
WOW!!!!! AMAZING!
Blush Thanks... :3
This is good
WOW awesome though it seems more like a song...
This is great!!! =D
This are amazing! Both of the poems(:
those r REALLY good!!!! ur an AWESOME writer! :D
Wow. Beautiful.
Tank yew c:
Tank yew c: