Story/Quiz reviews
Here goes nothing. No offence intended to authors, but I'm used to speaking my mind.
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fwP5aKY/I-fell-in-love-with-the-playerGREAT
Author: Izzabella
All in all, a well written story. It's kinda long so if you think Marueder-era Harry Potter love stories aren't that great I wouldn't suggest reading it. Lots of good descriptions.
My tips to the author:
1. Try to use more breaks in the writing. The way it all runs together makes it a little hard to read.
2. Try using shorter chapters (I know I'm one to talk. I have really long chapters)
Author: Izzabella
All in all, a well written story. It's kinda long so if you think Marueder-era Harry Potter love stories aren't that great I wouldn't suggest reading it. Lots of good descriptions.
My tips to the author:
1. Try to use more breaks in the writing. The way it all runs together makes it a little hard to read.
2. Try using shorter chapters (I know I'm one to talk. I have really long chapters)
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Thanks! :)
Yeah, I'm trying to work on the breaks and long chapters. :P
Thanks for reviewing my story! :D
can you pleeeaassee review mine? I want it to have more publicity and views!!!!!! It's called: Wolves Imprinting on Wolves? (Jacob Black Love Story)
You can find it in my "Created" folder on my page! I can send you the lin if you'd like too!
I know,I get confused by them too,and my brother tends to mess with my stories,so I can blame him most of the time!
Can you review my "I Love The Way You Lie" story please?
Can you give me a link?
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g8y4o12/I-love-the-way-you-lie-New-chapter-every-night-Read-intro
Pleasereview my story!!!! It's called Celaeno Solaris, find it in my created folder on my page,tnx=] I love these reviews=]
Link please.
Phase:means it goes from one thing to another,in this case it means from wolf to human or human to wolf!
That help you any? Or did I just make it more confusing?
Like a skin walker?
Kinda! Just,these ones can only turn into a wolf and human! Unlike skin walkers which can turn into anything that's human!
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g6KANp6/Calaeno-Solaris
Thank you for reviewing my story!
1. I'm a grammar nazi, so when I misspell ANYTHING AT ALL its rare. So Im not really sure why you put that, but okay.
2. Phased is when they shapeshift from human to wolf, and vise versa.
: ) :3
Can you please review my story? http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g2Z9Iqt/The-Forest-of-Power
Thanks.