He Makes Me Feel Perfect
this story is about my crush and how I began to like him. I don't want to reveal his name so I'll call him Xavier and my name will be Sally. I am a Chinese girl with black hair and dark brown eyes. I am one of the smartest kids in the sixth grade. So yeah.
Chapter 1
Xavier
My teachers told us to try and arrange ourselves in alphabetical order without help.
"all right! Anyone with a last name that starts with an A?" this kid shouted out
Great, know I know who will be the bossiest kid in this class, i thought to myself.
I went to the back of the class since my last name started with a S. I tried working backwards.
"whats your last name?" I asked a tall blonde girl.
"siphol"
"yours?" I asked a boy with crooked teeth and brown hair with big brown eyes. He was kinda cute.
"Varga"
I heard my teacher say in the background, "well we all know who's going to be the bossy one in this class!" talking about the kid Xavier.
I rolled my eyes. I put Kevin Varga behind Sam Siphol and plopped myself in the seat by my friend Paige Roses. By the time the bossy kid was done, there was about ten more minutes of class. Everyone just talked until the bell rung. I had ELA first and second period with a four minute break in between. I decided
to talk to my friends from my elementary school during break. We all stayed in
the classroom because no one really had anywhere to go. I mean it was the first day of a brand new school, where were you going to go?
"hey Jess! Love the purple on you." everything she was wearing was purple. Jess was my bffl since third grade. She actually looked kinda bad, but we recently got into a big fight during the summer and I wanted to make things right
again.
"Thanks!"
My teacher talked to us about what this year would be like for us during second
period. The day went by pretty quickly and I liked a lot of my teachers. I couldn't
ask for the day to be any better.
fast foward to Friday
I really liked middle school. Everyone was so nice(for now)! During sixth period (social studies) I was told to go drop something off to a teacher down the hall.
"Xavier! Go with Sally! Be her bodyguard."
"What? Oh, okay!" He tried jumping over the seat but stumbled and almost fell on his face. The teacher rolled his eyes while everyone laughed.
He walked into and down the halls with his arms crossed and with a very
serious face. I couldn't stop myself from laughing. I knew I was going to get
yelled at for the noise. We reached my science teacher's room that was shared with another teacher.
"this is for miss Masik?" I said to the teacher.
" okay, just leave it on the table." I could tell she was mad at me for interrupting her lesson. I saw some of my friends in this class. Xavier and I walked back to class. I just couldn't stop looking into his eyes. They were ocean blue. He had glasses that framed his face so well. His hair was light brown and he had a Bieber cut. And there was just a light that hit him at a perfect angle. I knew I wanted to be his.
Xavier's POV (probably) :
She had a girl stache but she had perfect lips. I just wanted to kiss them her. We got to class but I wanted to spend more time with her. I made everyone laugh by making side comments while the teacher was talking. I quickly looked at Sally to see if she laughed. She did. I got yelled at for behaving inappropriately. I didn't care. All I wanted was to spend more time with her.
My POV:
We walked into class, but I wanted to spend more time with him. During the rest of the period, he became the class clown. We got lectured by our teacher for "behaving in an inappropiate matter" and how the principal would fire him for letting us get out of control. I didn't care. I wanted to spend more time with him.
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"all right! Anyone with a last name that starts with an A?" this kid shouted out
Great, know I know who will be the bossiest kid in this class, i thought to myself.
I went to the back of the class since my last name started with a S. I tried working backwards.
"whats your last name?" I asked a tall blonde girl.
"siphol"
"yours?" I asked a boy with crooked teeth and brown hair with big brown eyes. He was kinda cute.
"Varga"
I heard my teacher say in the background, "well we all know who's going to be the bossy one in this class!" talking about the kid Xavier.
I rolled my eyes. I put Kevin Varga behind Sam Siphol and plopped myself in the seat by my friend Paige Roses. By the time the bossy kid was done, there was about ten more minutes of class. Everyone just talked until the bell rung. I had ELA first and second period with a four minute break in between. I decided
to talk to my friends from my elementary school during break. We all stayed in
the classroom because no one really had anywhere to go. I mean it was the first day of a brand new school, where were you going to go?
"hey Jess! Love the purple on you." everything she was wearing was purple. Jess was my bffl since third grade. She actually looked kinda bad, but we recently got into a big fight during the summer and I wanted to make things right
again.
"Thanks!"
My teacher talked to us about what this year would be like for us during second
period. The day went by pretty quickly and I liked a lot of my teachers. I couldn't
ask for the day to be any better.
fast foward to Friday
I really liked middle school. Everyone was so nice(for now)! During sixth period (social studies) I was told to go drop something off to a teacher down the hall.
"Xavier! Go with Sally! Be her bodyguard."
"What? Oh, okay!" He tried jumping over the seat but stumbled and almost fell on his face. The teacher rolled his eyes while everyone laughed.
He walked into and down the halls with his arms crossed and with a very
serious face. I couldn't stop myself from laughing. I knew I was going to get
yelled at for the noise. We reached my science teacher's room that was shared with another teacher.
"this is for miss Masik?" I said to the teacher.
" okay, just leave it on the table." I could tell she was mad at me for interrupting her lesson. I saw some of my friends in this class. Xavier and I walked back to class. I just couldn't stop looking into his eyes. They were ocean blue. He had glasses that framed his face so well. His hair was light brown and he had a Bieber cut. And there was just a light that hit him at a perfect angle. I knew I wanted to be his.
Xavier's POV (probably) :
She had a girl stache but she had perfect lips. I just wanted to kiss them her. We got to class but I wanted to spend more time with her. I made everyone laugh by making side comments while the teacher was talking. I quickly looked at Sally to see if she laughed. She did. I got yelled at for behaving inappropriately. I didn't care. All I wanted was to spend more time with her.
My POV:
We walked into class, but I wanted to spend more time with him. During the rest of the period, he became the class clown. We got lectured by our teacher for "behaving in an inappropiate matter" and how the principal would fire him for letting us get out of control. I didn't care. I wanted to spend more time with him.
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I am so sorry for all the wierd spaces. I was writing this story on my iPad and I guess some glitch took over. So I'm really sorry!
This is awsome more