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Chapter 1
What should I write next?
Hi friends and anyone who reads my work (: First of all, thank you so much for reading. Please comment below on this. If I don't have enough comments and feedback, I won't have enough to go on to continue my stories D:
Once I am back on a roll with Monster Holding My Heart, what should I do next? What should I plot for? Here are some name titles and plots to go with them for you to review and check out. Again, please comment on which ones are your top favorites! I am desperate for feedback.....
Cleanup on Aisle 9:
A scream is heard from the yogurt section. People come running- whether to help the voice who's being hurt, or to get the newest information on the situation. What is it this time, Amy Green thought, Another dog running loose, a dead bug? Is the Yoplait: Dessert Delights area out of stock again? What ever shall we do?
But as she turns the corner to go down aisle nine, she realizes what the woman saw from the yogurt section. She is one of the first people on the scene. A naked person is in a shopping cart. Their hair is patchy- someone pulled it out. It's legs and arms lay hanging on the sides of the cart. This human is female. And she is most definitely dead.
Plot Summary: Amy Green- Fresh out of college. She's a newcomer to Los Angeles and is looking for an easy role in the LAPD, Los Angeles Police Department. She's seen bodies before, but always from an apprentices point of view. Now, fighting for this case, she battles with John the drunk sheriff, Leena the know-it-all senior investigator, and her worst-or best, depending on your view- enemy, Dino the German Sheppard. Amy makes new friends and true friends. But you never know whether you really know someone or not.
Right to Cover Arms:
Cat is a bright girl- when she's at school. At home, everything is a nightmare. Her father is a drunk, her sister ran away, her ex-boyfriend is out to kill her, and her mother wants her gone. Her father wants to sober up, so he forces Cat and her mother to move from sunny California to dreary Longview, Washington. This means that Cat has to lose what little she has of friends and try again at this new private school. Only this time she wants to be different then what she pretended to be for so long. She's going to her first day of school dressed in all black (with the exception of a few neon colors), ten plus layers of dark makeup, and a bad attitude. Her plan- repel the students at Mortuus TurpisMight change the name. But things don't go quite as she plans. With the yelling teachers and things getting worse at home, she flees and seeks shelter in the forest nearby their small home. When doing so, she comes across the most horrific thing she's never imagined.
Angel Seekers ( This is the Prologue of it):
Yes, darling reader. There are such things as Angels. There are Angels and Galians. Angels being female, Galians being male. Humans never know where they are lurking. They could be the man in the alleyway, the woman in the store, the child at the playground. And I, my dear, am an Angel Seeker. There are only five of us born at a time, and we have the sight to see the Angels and Galians apart from the ordinary humans. Few humans know about my kind or the Angels. Those who do are slaughtered for food (Angels and Galians have an appetite for them.), kept as slaves, or tortured as play-things until their deaths. Angels and Galians are terrible things, and need to be tortured for all they do to the world. It's my job to see that's done. My job in this lifetime is to track these monsters down and earn their trust. Then I must rip out their wings. It's like ripping out their soul. Without their wings they cannot return to the kingdom they came from. That's the whole point. If they cannot get back to the kingdom, they cannot reproduce with their own kind to make the terrible monstrous offspring. My life is hard. But their life is harder. Oh well.
For like..the third or fourth time, please comment on what order I should do these. (: Thanks so much.
Once I am back on a roll with Monster Holding My Heart, what should I do next? What should I plot for? Here are some name titles and plots to go with them for you to review and check out. Again, please comment on which ones are your top favorites! I am desperate for feedback.....
Cleanup on Aisle 9:
A scream is heard from the yogurt section. People come running- whether to help the voice who's being hurt, or to get the newest information on the situation. What is it this time, Amy Green thought, Another dog running loose, a dead bug? Is the Yoplait: Dessert Delights area out of stock again? What ever shall we do?
But as she turns the corner to go down aisle nine, she realizes what the woman saw from the yogurt section. She is one of the first people on the scene. A naked person is in a shopping cart. Their hair is patchy- someone pulled it out. It's legs and arms lay hanging on the sides of the cart. This human is female. And she is most definitely dead.
Plot Summary: Amy Green- Fresh out of college. She's a newcomer to Los Angeles and is looking for an easy role in the LAPD, Los Angeles Police Department. She's seen bodies before, but always from an apprentices point of view. Now, fighting for this case, she battles with John the drunk sheriff, Leena the know-it-all senior investigator, and her worst-or best, depending on your view- enemy, Dino the German Sheppard. Amy makes new friends and true friends. But you never know whether you really know someone or not.
Right to Cover Arms:
Cat is a bright girl- when she's at school. At home, everything is a nightmare. Her father is a drunk, her sister ran away, her ex-boyfriend is out to kill her, and her mother wants her gone. Her father wants to sober up, so he forces Cat and her mother to move from sunny California to dreary Longview, Washington. This means that Cat has to lose what little she has of friends and try again at this new private school. Only this time she wants to be different then what she pretended to be for so long. She's going to her first day of school dressed in all black (with the exception of a few neon colors), ten plus layers of dark makeup, and a bad attitude. Her plan- repel the students at Mortuus TurpisMight change the name. But things don't go quite as she plans. With the yelling teachers and things getting worse at home, she flees and seeks shelter in the forest nearby their small home. When doing so, she comes across the most horrific thing she's never imagined.
Angel Seekers ( This is the Prologue of it):
Yes, darling reader. There are such things as Angels. There are Angels and Galians. Angels being female, Galians being male. Humans never know where they are lurking. They could be the man in the alleyway, the woman in the store, the child at the playground. And I, my dear, am an Angel Seeker. There are only five of us born at a time, and we have the sight to see the Angels and Galians apart from the ordinary humans. Few humans know about my kind or the Angels. Those who do are slaughtered for food (Angels and Galians have an appetite for them.), kept as slaves, or tortured as play-things until their deaths. Angels and Galians are terrible things, and need to be tortured for all they do to the world. It's my job to see that's done. My job in this lifetime is to track these monsters down and earn their trust. Then I must rip out their wings. It's like ripping out their soul. Without their wings they cannot return to the kingdom they came from. That's the whole point. If they cannot get back to the kingdom, they cannot reproduce with their own kind to make the terrible monstrous offspring. My life is hard. But their life is harder. Oh well.
For like..the third or fourth time, please comment on what order I should do these. (: Thanks so much.



6 Comments
Wow. Very interesting writing style you have. I'm not sure which one to pick out of the three for the first one..
All of them would be great:)
I like 'Right to Cover Aren't
It kinda related to my life:/
I really like the 'Right to cover arms' idea. (:
Clwanup on Isle 9 intrigues me the most- Blame it on the fact I still recall you telling me the witty title in art (Yet I still forget stuff to thepoint of tattooing it on my hand in sharpie -_-) or the fact I just REALLY like a good murder psychosuspense novel...Either's cool with me.
Epic typo fail...I meant Cleanup, not whatever freak word my keyboard decided xD