Dreamer
Um, well I tried to write a poem.... It sucks though so I am sorry. I usually make poems rhyme but this one I did not. That's why is really terrible. I want to know what I can fix so if you have any suggestions, please tell me.
You say I'm a dreamer,
With my head in the clouds.
No future, hopeless ideas.
Just wasting my life.
You tell me I'm useless,
In this world we live in.
I guess you are right;
A dreamer has no place here.
So we make our own world.
Free from pain, suffering and fear.
To you, that's nothing more than a fantasy.
But to us, that's everything we are.
With my head in the clouds.
No future, hopeless ideas.
Just wasting my life.
You tell me I'm useless,
In this world we live in.
I guess you are right;
A dreamer has no place here.
So we make our own world.
Free from pain, suffering and fear.
To you, that's nothing more than a fantasy.
But to us, that's everything we are.
6 Comments
This doesn't suck! It's way better than anything I could ever hope to write! :D
Now that's a poem! BRAVO!
I like it and can seriously relate to it =)
:D I love it!!
Wonderful!
awesome