Where have you been all my life~ a Neville Longbottom love story

So this is a Neville Longbottom love story something different to my usual stories:
Name:Ellie Picket
Patronus:Dove
Age:13
Bestie:Neville Longbottom
Home:Orphanage
Personality: A lot like Luna with Luna's voice
Looks:Like Luna
P.S. In this i'm basically Luna in a different name and Luna doesn't exsist in this

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Chapter 1

The train ride

Ellie walked through the wall of platforms 9 and 10 and when she got through she loaded her stuff onto the train. Ellie was far to early! The train leaves at 11 and it was 10:30. At least she'd be gaurenteed a compartment. Ellie boarded the train with her sachel and picked a compartment near a door so she could be first off when the train stopped. She sat down, put her feet up and took out a book. Elllie couldn't really concentrate on it though she was far too excited for her 3rd year. Ellie leaned her head against the window and looked at her watch. Only 10:40. One or two people passed her compartment but it was early yet so she closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep. Ellie was already in her Gryffindor robes so she wouldn't have to change later.
"Um. Hi! Sorry to wake you but can i sit here? Everyewhere else is full." Ellie opened her eyes to see a nervous looking boy with big, brown eyes and slightly curly, brown hair. "Yes you may!" Ellie said smiling. "Tha-thanks!" He smiled nervously. Ellie got up and looked at him,"What time is it?" Ellie asked. "5 past 11." He replied. Ellie looked outside and sure enough the train was moving. Ellie stretched and yawned,"So Ellie why arn't you sitting with your friends?" he asked. "I don't have any!" Ellie replied. Neville looked shocked, nervous and ashamed of himself,"I'm sorry its really none of my buisness!" he said looking down,"I don't care. Why do you?" Ellie shrugged,"I just thought maybe you'd be sitting with them" Neville said sadly."People think i'm weird!" Ellie giggled. "They're probably right!" She giggled more. Neville was laughing too. "Um do you wanna be my friend?" Neville asked nervous. Ellie got up and hugged him,"Only if we can be bestie's!" she laughed. " Okay!" Neville smiled and Ellie sat back down across from him and smiled.They laughed and talked the for a long time. "Anything from the trolley dears?" Asked the trolley lady. Ellie gazed in awe at all the treats on the trolley,"Ellie if you want something get it." Neville said looking curiously,"I can't i have no money." Ellie said sadly. Neville looked shocked as Ellie hugged her legs," Two liquirice wands please?" Neville asked and he closed the compartment door and turned to Ellie and handed her one of the liquirice wands,"Wha-what?" Ellie asked looking up into Neville's brown eyes,"Here! You don't have any money so i got you one." Neville smiled. Ellie smiled too,"Thanks i'll try and tell the Nargels to spare you tonight!" Ellie whispered,"Nargels?" Neville asked,"Yeah but there are worse things out there but i believe Nargels are most reasonable." Ellie smiled. Neville gave out a small laugh and Ellie winked. The train stopped. "Ok well bye Neville." Ellie said and smiled at him,"Where are you going?" Neville asked grabbing her wrist,"I'm letting you go back to your real friends. Maybe if you don't have a seat again this would be fun to do again." Ellie sighed and began to turn away but Neville kept his grip oh her wrist, "I thought we were best friends?" Neville asked sad,"Really?" Ellie asked. "Even though i just told you i believe in Nargels?" Ellie continued
"So i, Swear i, Do believe in Nargels." Neville sang. Ellie smiled and grabbed his hand and took him from the compartment together holding hands.

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