"Like a Liar" a Poem

"Like a Liar" a Poem

This is a poem that I wrote, and if you don't like it, feel free to comment on what's bad about it. If I'm terrible at poetry, I would like to know.

Chapter 1

Like a Liar

by: Vivichan
Like a butterfly,
you are gentle.
Like a doe,
you are graceful.

Like a fire,
you burn.
Like a cut,
you scar.

Like a rose,
you are beautiful.
Like a child,
you are innocent.

Like a storm,
you destroy.
Like a liar,
you decieve.

Our Recommendations

3 Comments

Only Quibblo Members Can Leave Comments

Please or to submit your comment.

Created by Vivichan

wereviv's avatar
Vivichan
17, Female
Decatur, IL, US
© 2014 Adknowledge EN, Inc.
X
X

Report This Content

Please explain why you feel this content is offensive: