"Like a Liar" a Poem
This is a poem that I wrote, and if you don't like it, feel free to comment on what's bad about it. If I'm terrible at poetry, I would like to know.
Like a butterfly,
you are gentle.
Like a doe,
you are graceful.
Like a fire,
you burn.
Like a cut,
you scar.
Like a rose,
you are beautiful.
Like a child,
you are innocent.
Like a storm,
you destroy.
Like a liar,
you decieve.
you are gentle.
Like a doe,
you are graceful.
Like a fire,
you burn.
Like a cut,
you scar.
Like a rose,
you are beautiful.
Like a child,
you are innocent.
Like a storm,
you destroy.
Like a liar,
you decieve.
3 Comments
Its really good. a little short maybe but good haha :-) maybe you could add what the liar did and how it made you feel or made someone else feel. then write that first bit again. just my advice but its good :-)
thankyou! i really appreciate your opinion:)
No problem :-)