Alice (an original story by me)
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Chapter 1
Alice and Suzie
Alice was a 12-year-old girl, she had brown long hair, she also had brown eyes. Alice lived with her parents, they weren’t exactly what you would call friendly, they where what you would call rood selfish and mean.
Whenever Alice talked to her parents they would just ignore her, so she decided to have imaginary friends, but Suzie was the girl that she talked to the most.
“Hello” Alice said to Suzie as she set her backpack down on the bed. “Hi” Said Suzie
“how was school?”
“Fine.” Said Alice
“did you make any new friends?” Asked Suzie
“No, you ask me that every time I come home from school.” Said Alice
“well I’m just curious” Said Suzie “I’m sure you’ll make new friends soon” “Yeah right nobody ever talks to me” Said Alice “Well Alice, you should just try to talk to other people.”
“What’s the use in trying, my parents wouldn’t even let me have friends in the house.”
“ You should ask you’re parents.”
“If they would answer me I would ask them.”
“Oh Alice will you please ask them just this once?”
“Oh, I don’t now.”
“Okay…”
“Great will you ask them right now”
“Well let me do my homework first.”
Whenever Alice talked to her parents they would just ignore her, so she decided to have imaginary friends, but Suzie was the girl that she talked to the most.
“Hello” Alice said to Suzie as she set her backpack down on the bed. “Hi” Said Suzie
“how was school?”
“Fine.” Said Alice
“did you make any new friends?” Asked Suzie
“No, you ask me that every time I come home from school.” Said Alice
“well I’m just curious” Said Suzie “I’m sure you’ll make new friends soon” “Yeah right nobody ever talks to me” Said Alice “Well Alice, you should just try to talk to other people.”
“What’s the use in trying, my parents wouldn’t even let me have friends in the house.”
“ You should ask you’re parents.”
“If they would answer me I would ask them.”
“Oh Alice will you please ask them just this once?”
“Oh, I don’t now.”
“Okay…”
“Great will you ask them right now”
“Well let me do my homework first.”



5 Comments
It's very good Charlotte, keep working on it! =)
That is really good! Keep it up!
Great Job, Keep the good work!
First story ? Magnifice ' ! Glad your making a story !
Cool story!