I'm Done (a poem)
if u read please please please comment!!!! i really wanna know your opinion on my writing! kk,thanks! :)
~Becca
I'm sick of your lies,
coming undone over time.
I'm sick of the pain,
coming from the ones I love the most.
I'm sick of this life,
falling apart all around me.
I'm moving on.
I'm done with this world.
I'm done with your shiit.
I'm done being strong.
I'm done with everything.
Good bye,
cruel,harsh world,
I say as I pull the triggar,
I'm done.
coming undone over time.
I'm sick of the pain,
coming from the ones I love the most.
I'm sick of this life,
falling apart all around me.
I'm moving on.
I'm done with this world.
I'm done with your shiit.
I'm done being strong.
I'm done with everything.
Good bye,
cruel,harsh world,
I say as I pull the triggar,
I'm done.
13 Comments
i know whats its like. ive written many a poems just like just one. its good, real good as long as you dont really mean it, if you really mean it please message me. ive been there.
thanks,and i don't really mean,not anymore anyways.
thats good. but i liked the poem
thanks! i'm happy u like it. :)
that's an amazing poem, i totally connect.
thanks! :)
i recognize this feeling! nice poem!
wow great poem, it describes a lot
I know what that's like
awesome
Good Poem. : )
Is this how you really feel? I'm so sorry. I hope things get better for you.
I used to be in your position and I never believed people when they said it, but coming from someone who got older and wiser: "It gets better" when you hit college/uni and get out on your own, have more control over your life, get a wider life experience, get out from under the 'rents thumb, you really see how beautiful and awesome life can be for you. Just hang in there or you'll miss the best of it.