Can u guys tell me what u think?

I'm writting poems for a bit

Chapter 1

Cookie Monster

It all started one day while we were eating lobster
Then came in a big hairy monster.
My brother laughed, pointed to it, then said "Looky looky!"
I ignored it till it took my desert, my choclate chip cookie!

My little brother squealed with delight
While I ran to my room in fright
I knew what I had to do
Although it would make me blue

I gave him all my cookies and watched him eat it so fast
Not one single second did they last
He ran out the metal door while he screamed
"COOKIES, COOKIES, COOKIES GALORE!"

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