Can u guys tell me what u think?
I'm writting poems for a bit
Chapter 1
Cookie Monster
It all started one day while we were eating lobster
Then came in a big hairy monster.
My brother laughed, pointed to it, then said "Looky looky!"
I ignored it till it took my desert, my choclate chip cookie!
My little brother squealed with delight
While I ran to my room in fright
I knew what I had to do
Although it would make me blue
I gave him all my cookies and watched him eat it so fast
Not one single second did they last
He ran out the metal door while he screamed
"COOKIES, COOKIES, COOKIES GALORE!"
Then came in a big hairy monster.
My brother laughed, pointed to it, then said "Looky looky!"
I ignored it till it took my desert, my choclate chip cookie!
My little brother squealed with delight
While I ran to my room in fright
I knew what I had to do
Although it would make me blue
I gave him all my cookies and watched him eat it so fast
Not one single second did they last
He ran out the metal door while he screamed
"COOKIES, COOKIES, COOKIES GALORE!"



52 Comments
Lol's nice, this is good.
thnx
This is good! And funny! :-D
lol. Random, Funny, Totally Awesome.
This is funny! I like funny poems :)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOL
Awesome XD
Awesome, I wish I was cookie monster, then i could eat cookies all day
Ur like my friend, she's hecka skinny but she always eating cookies and calling her cookie monster's bride :P
HAHAHAHA! i like it!!!! here's a cookie for you, not the monster! (::)
Yay eats it and hides from cookie monster
Awesome. Goes and continues to munch on a cookie
hey, can I have one looks at u
LOL!! Love it!