what make you beautiful ( A one direction love story )
Chapter 1
character info/ maddie Jones pov
volleyballgirl527 character
Name: Amber Rose
Age: 19
Looks: brown wavy hair, bright blue eyes, slender, tall, light olive skin
Love Interest: Liam Payne
Other: ended up getting accepted to her dream college after high school, is crushing on Liam even though she thinks there is no chance, very very very humble
katieau character
name: maddie Jones
age: 18
looks: tallish, long wave brown hair, skinny, blue eye's, tanish
love interest: zayn malik
other:lives in the london, dad & mum split up when young, only child, favourite colours are black, blue and red, loves to be funny and love helps people and likes to act cute
maddie Jones pov
one year a go by best friend Amber Rose and i had graduated from high school and we promised each other that we will never stop phoning each other but that that all changed when we got jobs and we just grow apart i don't know why but....... beep.....beep.....beep my alarm went of oh my god it was only a dream i do miss my friend but i need to get ready for the ONE DIRECTION concert. the concert was at 8:30 and i had 2 hours to get ready i had this beautiful red dress with a black cardigan and some black pumps i put on some light make up on and did my hair and then i had 30 minutes so i got in my car and drove of to the stadium that was not to far from my house the best thing is that i got back stage tickets to meet them i person and i can't wait to meet zayn he is my favourite he is so cute and adorable and his eye are so deep. when i got to the stadium there where so many screaming fan girl i could not believe it but there was a long line but lucky i brought back stage tickets because there was another little line next to it saying back stage passes only so i went up to show them my back stage pass so i can go to my seat a man showed me were my seat was and i had a front row tickets not long until the stadium was filled up with screaming girls and all the lights went out and a video stared to play then the video stopped on one of the boy's it was Harry then it played again the it stopped then ti was Louis then again the same thing happened but this time it was ZAYN and i screamed for him then the same thing happened but it was Niall this time then Liam then all of them came running out on to the stage then they started singing NA NA NA when it went all quiet i yelled out I LOVE YOU ZAYN and he saw me and grabbed my hand and kissed it i went read in the face and all the girls around me went awwwwwwwww and i just blushed like crazy and ZAYN laughed and i went even more read if that was possible the concert went quick and the girls with the back stage passes were shown where to go when we got back stage i was talking to some of the girls then i saw my best friend i yelled out AMBER ROSE she turned around and yelled back MADDIE JONES we ran to each other and stared talking and we gave our numbers to each other and we talked for a bit and she told me she likes Liam and i told her that i like ZAYN and she said did you hear the fan who yelled out to zayn that she loved him and i stood there and blushed and she was like YOU WERE THE ONE WHO SAID IT O M G when it was our turn to go see one direction zayn looked at me and came over and said so you love me do ya i stood there and looked at Amber and she giggled to her self and all of a sudden Liam came up and said you have a lovely goggle and she blushed so back to ZAYN and ME so you love me do ya and i said ya i do why he said because i like you and i just blushed even harder and he said would you like to go to the after party with me and i think your friend likes Liam.
Name: Amber Rose
Age: 19
Looks: brown wavy hair, bright blue eyes, slender, tall, light olive skin
Love Interest: Liam Payne
Other: ended up getting accepted to her dream college after high school, is crushing on Liam even though she thinks there is no chance, very very very humble
katieau character
name: maddie Jones
age: 18
looks: tallish, long wave brown hair, skinny, blue eye's, tanish
love interest: zayn malik
other:lives in the london, dad & mum split up when young, only child, favourite colours are black, blue and red, loves to be funny and love helps people and likes to act cute
maddie Jones pov
one year a go by best friend Amber Rose and i had graduated from high school and we promised each other that we will never stop phoning each other but that that all changed when we got jobs and we just grow apart i don't know why but....... beep.....beep.....beep my alarm went of oh my god it was only a dream i do miss my friend but i need to get ready for the ONE DIRECTION concert. the concert was at 8:30 and i had 2 hours to get ready i had this beautiful red dress with a black cardigan and some black pumps i put on some light make up on and did my hair and then i had 30 minutes so i got in my car and drove of to the stadium that was not to far from my house the best thing is that i got back stage tickets to meet them i person and i can't wait to meet zayn he is my favourite he is so cute and adorable and his eye are so deep. when i got to the stadium there where so many screaming fan girl i could not believe it but there was a long line but lucky i brought back stage tickets because there was another little line next to it saying back stage passes only so i went up to show them my back stage pass so i can go to my seat a man showed me were my seat was and i had a front row tickets not long until the stadium was filled up with screaming girls and all the lights went out and a video stared to play then the video stopped on one of the boy's it was Harry then it played again the it stopped then ti was Louis then again the same thing happened but this time it was ZAYN and i screamed for him then the same thing happened but it was Niall this time then Liam then all of them came running out on to the stage then they started singing NA NA NA when it went all quiet i yelled out I LOVE YOU ZAYN and he saw me and grabbed my hand and kissed it i went read in the face and all the girls around me went awwwwwwwww and i just blushed like crazy and ZAYN laughed and i went even more read if that was possible the concert went quick and the girls with the back stage passes were shown where to go when we got back stage i was talking to some of the girls then i saw my best friend i yelled out AMBER ROSE she turned around and yelled back MADDIE JONES we ran to each other and stared talking and we gave our numbers to each other and we talked for a bit and she told me she likes Liam and i told her that i like ZAYN and she said did you hear the fan who yelled out to zayn that she loved him and i stood there and blushed and she was like YOU WERE THE ONE WHO SAID IT O M G when it was our turn to go see one direction zayn looked at me and came over and said so you love me do ya i stood there and looked at Amber and she giggled to her self and all of a sudden Liam came up and said you have a lovely goggle and she blushed so back to ZAYN and ME so you love me do ya and i said ya i do why he said because i like you and i just blushed even harder and he said would you like to go to the after party with me and i think your friend likes Liam.



26 Comments
OMG I LOOOVE THIS MORE PLZ
your welcome
your welcome
i love it more please
Awesome story!!!
love it keep writing an can i be dating louis plz at the party i look like. . .
hair:golden
face:frecals across my face stating at on eye going over the nose and ending under the other eye
eyes:blue with then hazle around the puple just like on the cover of "the host" again exept hazle instead of silzer
lol thanks if u can if u can im also fine with it!
i will think about when a say think about it's usually a yes
oh and my name is Corley
cool first name what will be your last name
deTuro. . .its italin and i can sing. . . that might help u some how
ok i will try to see if i can get you a spot
This Is Really Good!
thank you
YAY! thank u so much
your welcome
your welcome
more please
ok