My poem I made.
It's not the best, I know. But it's one of my better ones. Maybe read it? Thanks..
Chapter 1
Yup...
Why must the world do this?
The pain it brings, death always a near miss.
Always so cruel, always so unfair.
But I guess that's just the way it is, isn't it, dear?
Nothing we can do to stop it,
The world just keeps on turning, some gloating as if they're atop it.
All we can do is make the best of everything,
And hold on to the very little sanity we have left, even that is something.
Not much comfort, I know,
But if it makes it any better, I'll hold you until the pain goes.
I'll be there for you,
Even as the world turns, and as others pay their dues.
The world is a cruel place, isn't it, dear?
Always unfair, and filled with fear..
The pain it brings, death always a near miss.
Always so cruel, always so unfair.
But I guess that's just the way it is, isn't it, dear?
Nothing we can do to stop it,
The world just keeps on turning, some gloating as if they're atop it.
All we can do is make the best of everything,
And hold on to the very little sanity we have left, even that is something.
Not much comfort, I know,
But if it makes it any better, I'll hold you until the pain goes.
I'll be there for you,
Even as the world turns, and as others pay their dues.
The world is a cruel place, isn't it, dear?
Always unfair, and filled with fear..



24 Comments
i like it
Thanks Glory..
>:D What sanity? Lost it ages ago.
Nice :)
^-^ wow! :)
Thank you..
That's really good!
=)
Thank you. It's not the best, but thanks..
Are you at all surprised?
You seem to be very sane. At least more so than my friend Chantel in real life. She's bloody crazy :)
Not sane!
Then we shall be forever crazy! :P
good like it
Thanks
welcome
It's nice.
Thank you..
Welco.
So good! And also so true...
Thank you :)