May
For someone specific. ♥
I want to write you something so wonderful
Something to match the words you wrote, it was so beautiful
It made me stop, it made me think
It made me realize I wasn't a missing link
You cared about me, I wasn't alone
No, you were there, a sister to call my own
But every time I try to write a simple lullaby for you
The words escape me, no rhythm holds true
Maybe it's because no words can describe what you did for me
You opened my eyes, you made me see
Everything you said
In response to my thoughts that were misled
Everything you did
Was everything I needed right then
I want to write you an amazing poem, an amazing piece of rhyme
That means as much to you, as your words mean to me, and as beautiful as the night sky
And maybe, someday, I will
I'll find the words for the space that has a hole to fill
But, for now, I want to say I love your beautiful, wonderful, amazing self
And because of you, my sister, I've gotten up from where I fell.
Something to match the words you wrote, it was so beautiful
It made me stop, it made me think
It made me realize I wasn't a missing link
You cared about me, I wasn't alone
No, you were there, a sister to call my own
But every time I try to write a simple lullaby for you
The words escape me, no rhythm holds true
Maybe it's because no words can describe what you did for me
You opened my eyes, you made me see
Everything you said
In response to my thoughts that were misled
Everything you did
Was everything I needed right then
I want to write you an amazing poem, an amazing piece of rhyme
That means as much to you, as your words mean to me, and as beautiful as the night sky
And maybe, someday, I will
I'll find the words for the space that has a hole to fill
But, for now, I want to say I love your beautiful, wonderful, amazing self
And because of you, my sister, I've gotten up from where I fell.
59 Comments
I'm crying. ♥♥
It's not the best...I wanted it to be perfect...
It's perfect to me..♥
♥ I love you.
♥ I love you too. ♥
Awww
How are you not a famous poet? That almost made me cry..
That is very sweet of you, but I'm not that good.
True. You're not good, you're amazing.
Once again, very sweet, but I'm not an amazing poet. :) But thank you.
Hmmmm.. then let us call you an amazing, superb, fantastic, terrific, marvelous poet.
(I'm not giving up on this)
I'm not giving up either. :) I am not a (insert anything positive) poet.
I used a synonym dictionary XD
And yes, you are.
I use those all the time. Very necessary for a poet. But I am not a good one. :)
Me too! And the rhyming dictionary too, very often XD
Me niether. And most certainly not better than you..
Anybody and everybody is better than me. :) That means you are, too.
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/hSp1IPD/Sticks-And-Stones-An-Original-Poem-About-Bullying
Read that. Then say again that I'm a better writer than you.
That was very beautiful.
.. no.
Yes, it was. And I'm not just saying that. It's a lot better than the poem I'm working on right now.
I'm working on a poem right now too.. actually, I wrote it last week then copied it over. Now I'm just pondering whether I should actually create a story with it..
I think you should. :)