On Owl's Wing
TO ALL WRITERS: Please use your BEST writing skills when adding to this story!
TO EVERYBODY ELSE: Please don't make whatever you write too stupid.....
THIS IS A STORY ABOUT A YOUNG FEMALE SNOWY OWL NAMED WING WHO IS GOING ON HER FIRST FLIGHT.....
Chapter 1
Big Pine
My name is White.
I am a Snowy Owl.
I live in a huge nest at the top of Big Pine.
I am the middle of three.
Today will be my proudest moment.
Today i will learn to fly.
I gather up all my strength and follow my dad, Jace, to the edge of a branch.
"Now White," he told me, "Don't be afraid. Being afraid will just make you unsure. And if you are unsure, you'll fall and die."
A shiver went up my spine. "Ouch," I mumbled, and shifted through the thick snow next to him.
"Ready?" he called.
"Wait, WHAT!?!? I'm not ready! What do I even do?! I don't know HOW to fly yet!
What if I---"
And he gave mye a shove so that I plummeted down to the ground. I spread my wings and............................
TO BE CONTINUED
I am a Snowy Owl.
I live in a huge nest at the top of Big Pine.
I am the middle of three.
Today will be my proudest moment.
Today i will learn to fly.
I gather up all my strength and follow my dad, Jace, to the edge of a branch.
"Now White," he told me, "Don't be afraid. Being afraid will just make you unsure. And if you are unsure, you'll fall and die."
A shiver went up my spine. "Ouch," I mumbled, and shifted through the thick snow next to him.
"Ready?" he called.
"Wait, WHAT!?!? I'm not ready! What do I even do?! I don't know HOW to fly yet!
What if I---"
And he gave mye a shove so that I plummeted down to the ground. I spread my wings and............................
TO BE CONTINUED



3 Comments
Please add on to this! This is my first chain story and I want to make it EPIC!! :D
Please add on to this! This is my first chain story and I want to make it EPIC!! :D
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/heOIV5e/On-Owls-Wing
Congrats--here's chapter two.