Help please.
sorry if i'm clogging up your inbox, but its somewhat important.
Chapter 1
Need help!
Okay so I finally have an idea for a story, but I want to make sure if you guys would read it and need some help with a name for it. Its a fantasy adventure type story.
This is my idea:
Kari Stone was orphaned when she was just a baby. She was taken in by Aurora Sills a half wizard, half elf warrior. Aurora trained Kari to become an excellent fighter. Years later when Kari is 15, Alzure(the realm they live in)is falling apart by the war against the Zords( 9 foot creatures with sharp teeth and rough scale purple skin). Kari must help her master Aurora fight them while journeying to far places to find clues of what happen to her parents. Meeting friends along the way,making enemies with the evil Queen Silver, and coping with her powers she swore never to use again. This will be an adventure Kari will never forget.
So tell me what you think about it. Should make this story or just forget about it? You deiced. And help me think of a good title for it.
~Thank you for your time. :)
This is my idea:
Kari Stone was orphaned when she was just a baby. She was taken in by Aurora Sills a half wizard, half elf warrior. Aurora trained Kari to become an excellent fighter. Years later when Kari is 15, Alzure(the realm they live in)is falling apart by the war against the Zords( 9 foot creatures with sharp teeth and rough scale purple skin). Kari must help her master Aurora fight them while journeying to far places to find clues of what happen to her parents. Meeting friends along the way,making enemies with the evil Queen Silver, and coping with her powers she swore never to use again. This will be an adventure Kari will never forget.
So tell me what you think about it. Should make this story or just forget about it? You deiced. And help me think of a good title for it.
~Thank you for your time. :)



23 Comments
it looks..............AWESOMELY AMAZING
Thanks for the input! :)
You should definitely write this!!! I know I would read it. :D
Thanks!
I like it. You should write about it! Now for the title.....hmm
1. The Truth Within?
2. Be Stronger than You Are?
3. Fight Til the End?
4. Blood, Sweat, and Tears?
Yeah I don't really know...lol
lol Well thanks for trying. I'll consider them. :D
Write it! you CAN'T let this great idea go to waste
Okay. I'll write it. XD Thanks for liking it!
You should SO write it!!! Looks great(: Seriously, the only name I can think of is, like, The Adventures of Kari Stone. Yeah, my brain's not really working so hard today XD And I will so read it!
Its okay. Thanks for trying to come up with a title and for liking my idea. :)
I love it!!!! I have no idea what you could name it though! X3
Thanks!
Dude....seriously??is there really a need to ask us this??WRITE IT PLEASE!!!!!!!i will totally read it.It sounds pretty beast XD
Yes I'll write it as soon as I come up with a name for it. Thanks for your input! :)
It is a very cool idea,
This would be EXCELLENT!!
I love it! Please write the story. I can't wait to read it