Please read and tell me if you think i was good at writing when I was 9!!! xD
Ok so here's a story i just found that i wrote when i was like 9 i think. i only had one chapter and it was really short but I just wanted to know what you guys think. xD Soo here we go:
Ramona the wolf burst out of the wolves den, gasping for air. She knew she had to get rid of them somehow, but it would take more than that to stop the Grey Pack. She ran all the way down the cliff and decided to run home. "Transform!" Yelled Ramona, and she transformed into a cheetah. She ran home. But on her way, she saw something glowing in a tree. She went up to it and put her hand inside, and pulled out a jewel. A glowing green jewel, to be exact. She took it home. "Ramona Alexis Campbell where have you been? You weren't off fighting those wolves again, were you?" asked Angel the Tiger.
Soo... what do you guys think?? I was like 9 or 10 i think and now i cant remember the plot or anything xD but did u like it?? just wondering. :)
~IM (WE'RE) DA BOMB AND IM (WE'RE) BOUT TO BLOW UP,
Dante Jr. (AND DANTE!)
Ramona the wolf burst out of the wolves den, gasping for air. She knew she had to get rid of them somehow, but it would take more than that to stop the Grey Pack. She ran all the way down the cliff and decided to run home. "Transform!" Yelled Ramona, and she transformed into a cheetah. She ran home. But on her way, she saw something glowing in a tree. She went up to it and put her hand inside, and pulled out a jewel. A glowing green jewel, to be exact. She took it home. "Ramona Alexis Campbell where have you been? You weren't off fighting those wolves again, were you?" asked Angel the Tiger.
Soo... what do you guys think?? I was like 9 or 10 i think and now i cant remember the plot or anything xD but did u like it?? just wondering. :)
~IM (WE'RE) DA BOMB AND IM (WE'RE) BOUT TO BLOW UP,
Dante Jr. (AND DANTE!)
24 Comments
It's interesting :) Better than me
lol i was nine when i wrote this
sounds pretty good :)
thankz :)
Not bad for a 10 year old. Or a 9 year old :D
xD thankz
that was really good for your age! (:
lol thankz im older now though my stories are probably better now xD
lol yeah i will go check out a few of your newer stories (: but first i gotta eat lunch! haha :P so ttyl! ;D
lol ok! :D
Yeah, you were great!!!
Thanks ^_^
You're welcome!!! You had a lot of talent, even when you were nine!!!
Well thank you very much! ^_^
TRANZFORM TURNS INTO MY PET UNICORN AND RIDES OF INT THE SUNSET you and i should rerwright it into a group story but more grown up
lol ok but im still gonna use my character lol i remember my character and 2 others but we dont have to put them in it if u dont wanna
no if u want u can keep them and i acutly think there realy cool
ok i'll message u da stuff
kay :)