Torn
*Flash back *
"Harry, listen to me I just can't do its ripping me apart! "You have me torn,I just can't bare with you ,and Niall fighting!" I yelled with fustration ,and sadness . I really did want to date him,but I couldn't put up with my boyfreind,and best friend fighting!
"Please Lily,just...I love you" He said as tears streamed down his face freely
I turned around letting the tears fall "I love you too" I whispered before running back to my house.
Flash back ended
Its been a week ,two days,3 hours ,4 minutes,and six seconds since I last seen Harry ! Yes,I kept track of the time since I broke up with him! I wouldn't of had to broken up with if my best friend Niall James Horan hadn't told me he loved me. We have been friends since 4th grade, and I have to admit I secerlty always had maybe a little crush on him..Who didn't ? His laugh lights up the room,his smile is the cutest thing ever,and him being hungery all time was just adorable! But there was thing that kept me from telling Niall my feelings was his bimbo of a girlfriend rosie! God,that girl made my blood boil ! Her perfect blonde hair that framed her face perfectly,her beuaitful blue eyes, and perfect body,drove me up the wall! My wavy brown hair,brown eyes, and curvy body was nothing compared to hers. Then I met Harry, I fell for his flirtlyness, his gorgeous deep green eyes,and his beauitful curls! Oh his curls made me want to rub my hand threw his hair,but No touching the hair! After I met Harry I totally forgot everything about Rosie, Harry ,and I texted ,and hung out all the time! Eventually he asked me out. Everything was picture perfect until Niall showed up at my door ,his face stained with tears,and a frown planted upon his lips. "May I come in " He asked in a broken whisper. Harry was waiting for me in the room to watch a movie,but I let Niall into my home.
"Harry I will be a couple minutes" I yelled
"Okay love" He called back
I lend Niall to the kitchen ,and passed him a tissue ,and a glass of water.
After he wiped his eyes he opened his mouthed to speak ,but just broke down in tears. I walked over slowly, and wrapped my arms around his shoulders ,and rubbed his back. "
"Rosie, bro-ke up with mee" He choked out
That Bimbo! She broke his fragile heart! She needs a good slap in the face!
"Why?!?!?!" I asked
"Cause I called her Lily by mistake" He whispered
"Why would you call her Lily ?!?!?" I questioned
"Because Lilly everytime I kissed her,or hugged her I thought of you ,and your flirt of a boyfriend! How I longed to be the one you loved,but I thought you would never love me,because what would a beauitful girl like you do with a ugly boy like me? "
"Niall I- He cut me off "I only went out with Rosie to forget about you,but it didn't work"
"Niall why didn't you just tell me?" I siad
" I am now" He whispered then put his hands on my cheeks ,and planted a soft gentle kiss on my lips"
My heart was beating faster ,My knees were weak! Oh how I longed for that! I love him ,I do! My thoughts were inturupted by Niall Falling to the floor...
"Harry, listen to me I just can't do its ripping me apart! "You have me torn,I just can't bare with you ,and Niall fighting!" I yelled with fustration ,and sadness . I really did want to date him,but I couldn't put up with my boyfreind,and best friend fighting!
"Please Lily,just...I love you" He said as tears streamed down his face freely
I turned around letting the tears fall "I love you too" I whispered before running back to my house.
Flash back ended
Its been a week ,two days,3 hours ,4 minutes,and six seconds since I last seen Harry ! Yes,I kept track of the time since I broke up with him! I wouldn't of had to broken up with if my best friend Niall James Horan hadn't told me he loved me. We have been friends since 4th grade, and I have to admit I secerlty always had maybe a little crush on him..Who didn't ? His laugh lights up the room,his smile is the cutest thing ever,and him being hungery all time was just adorable! But there was thing that kept me from telling Niall my feelings was his bimbo of a girlfriend rosie! God,that girl made my blood boil ! Her perfect blonde hair that framed her face perfectly,her beuaitful blue eyes, and perfect body,drove me up the wall! My wavy brown hair,brown eyes, and curvy body was nothing compared to hers. Then I met Harry, I fell for his flirtlyness, his gorgeous deep green eyes,and his beauitful curls! Oh his curls made me want to rub my hand threw his hair,but No touching the hair! After I met Harry I totally forgot everything about Rosie, Harry ,and I texted ,and hung out all the time! Eventually he asked me out. Everything was picture perfect until Niall showed up at my door ,his face stained with tears,and a frown planted upon his lips. "May I come in " He asked in a broken whisper. Harry was waiting for me in the room to watch a movie,but I let Niall into my home.
"Harry I will be a couple minutes" I yelled
"Okay love" He called back
I lend Niall to the kitchen ,and passed him a tissue ,and a glass of water.
After he wiped his eyes he opened his mouthed to speak ,but just broke down in tears. I walked over slowly, and wrapped my arms around his shoulders ,and rubbed his back. "
"Rosie, bro-ke up with mee" He choked out
That Bimbo! She broke his fragile heart! She needs a good slap in the face!
"Why?!?!?!" I asked
"Cause I called her Lily by mistake" He whispered
"Why would you call her Lily ?!?!?" I questioned
"Because Lilly everytime I kissed her,or hugged her I thought of you ,and your flirt of a boyfriend! How I longed to be the one you loved,but I thought you would never love me,because what would a beauitful girl like you do with a ugly boy like me? "
"Niall I- He cut me off "I only went out with Rosie to forget about you,but it didn't work"
"Niall why didn't you just tell me?" I siad
" I am now" He whispered then put his hands on my cheeks ,and planted a soft gentle kiss on my lips"
My heart was beating faster ,My knees were weak! Oh how I longed for that! I love him ,I do! My thoughts were inturupted by Niall Falling to the floor...
12 Comments
I loved it!!! I am just a sucker for romance since my romantic life sucks. Even though it was to early to get a real sense of the characters, when Niall told Lily how he felt it made me almost cry, it was so sweet. There were some spelling errors but I know that when you get the writing fever you dont really stop to check on mistakes, you let it all just flow. I thought it was good so far. A little rushed but still really good.
Hahaha same! Thanks! I know I was rushing cause I had to goo,sorry I will try better next chapter! Do you think its worth countuining ??:)
I loved it!!! I am just a sucker for romance since my romantic life sucks. Even though it was to early to get a real sense of the characters, when Niall told Lily how he felt it made me almost cry, it was so sweet. There were some spelling errors but I know that when you get the writing fever you dont really stop to check on mistakes, you let it all just flow. I thought it was good so far. A little rushed but still really good.
I loved it!!! I am just a sucker for romance since my romantic life sucks. Even though it was to early to get a real sense of the characters, when Niall told Lily how he felt it made me almost cry, it was so sweet. There were some spelling errors but I know that when you get the writing fever you dont really stop to check on mistakes, you let it all just flow. I thought it was good so far. A little rushed but still really good.
Sorry bout my millions of repeated comments but ya, I really think you should keep going. I know I am curious bout where the story goes.
Sorry bout my millions of repeated comments but ya, I really think you should keep going. I know I am curious bout where the story goes.
Haha Its okay,and thanks :)!
More please!
More!
Thanks lovelys! :) What team are you team Niall or Harry?:)
I think you should write about the rest of the band's feelings on this as well
Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!