Demon - Original Story
c: I just had an idea from drawing a picture... so I guess I'll give it a go!
Nothing really special about it.. :P
"Tessa, stop whining about it! If you don't want to be one, then go away! Us Demons, we have powers. How 'bout those humans? Nothing. They have nothing. No powers." he stops and catches his breath. "There's nothing special about being human. You had your chance to be one of them. There's no turning back, Tessa."
"That's a lie!" Tessa yells. "Being Demon has it's disadvantages too! We can't go in light. We burn. Humans - they can be everywhere they want."
"Except for Hell. They burn." he yells at Tessa. "Stop arguing! You won't win."
Tessa huffs. She hated being Demon. Nothing special about Humans? Nothing special about Demons. All we do is stay in Hell. We watch flames. We sit in flames.
Tessa stormed furiously to her room, and closed the door behind her, loudly.
"I don't like your attitude, little lady!" her father screamed.
Who said her father could control her life? She laid down on her bed. The houses in Hell was basically the only thing that looked related to Earth.
She then slowly got up, and made her way to her desk carved out of Hell Wood.
Hell Wood was basically like normal wood in Earth. But, if any other species other than Demons or Devils touch it, they would burn, or get badly injured. This wood protects any unwanted visitors. The things on the wood would also hurt you.
She grabbed her book that read- Demons.
"That's a lie!" Tessa yells. "Being Demon has it's disadvantages too! We can't go in light. We burn. Humans - they can be everywhere they want."
"Except for Hell. They burn." he yells at Tessa. "Stop arguing! You won't win."
Tessa huffs. She hated being Demon. Nothing special about Humans? Nothing special about Demons. All we do is stay in Hell. We watch flames. We sit in flames.
Tessa stormed furiously to her room, and closed the door behind her, loudly.
"I don't like your attitude, little lady!" her father screamed.
Who said her father could control her life? She laid down on her bed. The houses in Hell was basically the only thing that looked related to Earth.
She then slowly got up, and made her way to her desk carved out of Hell Wood.
Hell Wood was basically like normal wood in Earth. But, if any other species other than Demons or Devils touch it, they would burn, or get badly injured. This wood protects any unwanted visitors. The things on the wood would also hurt you.
She grabbed her book that read- Demons.
18 Comments
Sounds really interesting! I wonder what will happen next.
DEMONS. XD Lovely, darling. Next please!
O.O
You. Have. To. Keep. Writing!!!!! This is so good!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more!! :D
Oh! I love how you made her unable to understand the difference between kindness and evil. And the horns...Gotta love the horns.
You got all this from drawing a picture? Impressive!
I like the story so far. I'm intrigued to see what'll happen next.
O.o Mysterious, but cool :D Next chapter please!!
The end...:O Creepy. O.O WHO IS STALKING HER??
Great new chapter! As Linny said above, great ending. Creepy. :O
Make sure you watch your tenses, by the way. I noticed you switched a little between past and present. Otherwise, it's great. :)
Thanks! ^^
I don't like your attitude XD
As usual, good chapter!
Poor Tessa.