Emotional Scars
She twirled
She span
She fell
Fell hard against the ground
The cold ground
Her hands slamming against it
She lifted them slowly
Frail
White
So, so white
Except
For the pink
The pink lines
Carved across her hands
Those lines
Her scars
Her emotional scars
They told a story
It was a sad story
No one cared about it
About the story
Neither did she
The girl
Not anymore
She got to her feet
Slowly
So slowly
And the door opened
By itself
No
Not by itself
She'd opened it
Out she walked
Into the night
The cold dark night.
She span
She fell
Fell hard against the ground
The cold ground
Her hands slamming against it
She lifted them slowly
Frail
White
So, so white
Except
For the pink
The pink lines
Carved across her hands
Those lines
Her scars
Her emotional scars
They told a story
It was a sad story
No one cared about it
About the story
Neither did she
The girl
Not anymore
She got to her feet
Slowly
So slowly
And the door opened
By itself
No
Not by itself
She'd opened it
Out she walked
Into the night
The cold dark night.
10 Comments
omg, that.... was AWESOME!!!!!!!
o-o well, the music of my older brothers scary sad music just played when i started reading that. It fit perfectly! :O amazing
that. was. AMAZING!!!!
Thank you. That was amazing.
Amazing :)
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!!
Wow...
Nice! It has a story buried deep in it... Basically it's about moving on in life, and not staying on the road of pain and misery especially since one is in control? (Wow, did I just do a mini-critique?!) Anyway, it was nice. :)
HIGH FIVE HORRAH!!! :D SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS ME!!! :D
OMG my interpretation was right! Wait... there's no "right" or "wrong" in interpretations... Well, at least we were on the same page. :D Sometime I just like critiquing/analyzing things. :p Not a nerd, but sometimes I just can't help it. :))