A Beautiful Lie ( A Fantasy)

Okay sorry I haven't posted this in awhile!! I had writor's block and been very busy writing my other story. Anyways I decided to make it a story. I'll be posting or at least try to post every weekend.

Comment if you're still interested in reading the rest of the story!

Chapter 3


by: Today_
New Character:
More info:
im a ghost. i followed a ball into a street. i then got hit by a car but was still alive. i was trying to stay alive but when then i saw my mom get out the car and she laughed and said "finally shes out of my life" and i let myself die.
she is extremely smart even though she looks so young. shes been a ghost for so long. over 5 centuries.she loves to say quotes and is very mysterious.
Always is wearing this:

I smiled at her words, but it immediately faded when I heard her heart stop beating.
"Evie...Evie...Evelyn!" I shook her dead body. I looked up to see Alec looking at me with pity.
"She can't die." I told him.
"But she killed Alyssa!!!! My own blood! She deserves too die!" Ava shouted, tears streaming down her face.
"Alyssa had it coming!" I shouted.
"You don't know her like I do." Ava whispered.
I looked at Alexis who seemed to always be quiet. Everyone as staring at her waiting for her to let her opinion out.
"Everyone dies...but...I think...Evelyn...shouldn't die. I mean Alyssa showed her in her real form, and Evie didn’t die...humans die when they see us in our true form."
"What are you trying to say?" Alec asked.
Alexis walked up to me and kneeled, and looked at Evie, "That she's not human. Or maybe she is a gifted human."
"She's dead now there's nothing we can do about it, so let's just leave!" Ava shouted.
"Ava, you know I can't do that." Alec told her.
"Ava, we have a war in a few weeks and we are one short....we need every warrior we have....or we will loose...we are already outnumbered....." Alexis finally spoke up.
"What are you trying to say?"
Alexis and Alec exchanged glances, "We need to replace her with Evelyn."
"You guys disgust me!" Ava growled as her wings came out and she disappeared with Alyssa’s dead body in her arms.
Alec sighed, "We need to speak with ‘The almighty one’ "
"You mean...." Alexis began.
"Don't say his name! It's more powerful than you think." Alec told her covering her mouth.

Evie’s p.o.v
I woke up, and I wasn't in my room. I sat up from this king sized,uncomfortable, bed. I hugged my knees, and tried to remember at least something. I regretted it as soon as I remembered, Alyssa.What happened to her? I thought. The door opened and a man who looked like if he were in his 20s, had light brown hair, and beautiful blue eyes smiled at me.I took his smile the wrong way. I immediately backed up, and head the headboard.
"Don't worry I'm not going to hurt you." He responded. That's what they say to their victims.......but that's just a lie, a beautiful lie.
I got up, "I need to go home." was all I managed to whisper.
"Evelyn, I'm sorry but you can't go back home right now. Just wait...."
I cut him off, "What do you want from me?" I asked.
"I want you to understand that you can't go home. This is your home now."
I looked at the door, and his eyes were on me waiting for my next move. I ran for the door, but he grabbed me.
"I don't want to hurt you, Evelyn." He responded.
"Then leave me alone!" I shouted. He let me go.
"I can't do that. I'm sorry." He said as he left the room locking it.I banged against the door.
"Someone please help!!! Open the door!" I cried. After 5 minutes, I gave up. Who was that man, and most importantly what does he want from me?
I slid down the wall, and looked around. The room looked victorian.
Then I remembered the man's words, You can't go home......this is your home
I didn't understand why he would say that. I needed someone, someone to talk to.
As if on cue (Sp?), the room got colder and a figure appeared inches from me!
I jumped startle, and my heart started beating fast. There was a little girl right in front of me wearing a beautiful white dress. She looked like a ghost. I reached out for her, and my hand went right through her. She didn't move or anything her eyes were on me.
"You killed Alyssa." She spoke.
I gasped, I did kill her.
"It's alright. I actually want to thank you."
"Who are you?" I asked.
She smiled, and I could see that her hair was blonde, and she was around 5.
"I'm Maggie."
"But you're dead." I muttered not even thinking. She looked down.
"I wish I wasn't." She said as she gave me a fake smile.
"How....did you die?"
"My mother got rrraped by the god of Lust, Troy, and later she found out she was pregnant with me. Ava, her sister, convinced her to have me. Ever since I was born she hated me. She wanted to get rid of me, so one day I was outside playing with my ball. And suddenly it 'accidently' rolled down the road.I followed it and I got hit by a car. Being a goddess, I didn't die yet. The driver got out of the car, and it was my mother she sighed in relief, and said, 'Finally she's out of my life'. That was the day I let myself die. Ever since then she kept me trapped, but now that you killed her I'm free, but still trapped in earth."
First question that popped into my head was, "Who is your mother?"
She was about to answer, but the door opened.And she disappeared. I looked to see Sam, and immediately got up. He smiled at me as he pulled me into a hug.
I pulled away, "I want to go home." I almost begged.
"This is your home." He answered.
I looked at him in disbelief, "I thought you were my friend."
I then ran away from him, and I was faster. I opened the door, and saw the woods. We were in the middle of nowhere!
"I'll tell you this.."
I jumped startled by Sam. He was right behind me.
"I'll take you home, but only to move your things here."
I nodded. "Close your eyes." He whispered in my ears as he wrapped his arms around me. I did as he said and in a minute, we were in front of my house.
there were police everywhere.
"Did they find the body?" I whispered to Sam.
"No we cleaned it up, and it shouldn't be visible to humans." He replied resting his head on my shoulder from behind.
My parents who were talking to the cops, and when they saw me they ran over to me.
"Where were you?"
I'm so stupid I didn't think of what I was going to tell them.
"I found her lost in the woods, and brought her back here." Sam smiled.
"Thank you so much!" My mom said as tears of happiness streamed down her cheek.
Each tear seemed to stab me in my heart and if it weren't for Sam holding me from the waist, I would have fallen. Soon I would leave and it would be for, forever.
I felt a tear running down my cheek and I wiped it off so no one would see it. Sam did, though.
"Evie, didn't you have something to say to your parents?" Sam questioned me. I gave him a puzzled look.
"What is it?" My father encouraged.
"She applied for a college and they accepted her.She'll be leaving by tomorrow, but needs to leave with me now."
"Why didn't you tell us?" My mom asked. Sam nudged me lightly as if telling me it’s your turn now.
"I wanted it to be a......surprise.... So Surprise!" I told them giving them a fake smile, and spreading my arms out.
Sam chuckled beside me, and I blushed a little.
The police went away and I packed my clothes as Sam lay on my bed. Angela had gone to the restroom.
He was right behind me in a second. I turned around, surprised, at how close I was to him. Our faces were inches away.
"Evie,"He began, as he leaned down. I could already taste his sweet breathe. The door opened, and Angela came in, "I can't believe your going to college and you didn't tell me!"
When I turned back around Sam was on my bed, smirking.
I gave her a sheepishly smile, "Ta-da?"
"You're such a dork." She mumbled.
I giggled as I zipped my suitcase up. I saw one of the invisible guards from the castle pick it up.
Then there was a crash downstairs...........Sam shot me a look, and immediately got up.Angela ran down the stairs to see what it was. Sam and I followed. My eyes widened it was..........

COMMENT!to find out who it was!!
Oh and I made a picture for this story, and I think I might edit it more, but tell me what you think of it (Sorry Evie looks weird, it was the best way you could see her)

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