poem #6 (i love you)
i wrote this 4 my gf.........i love you baby
Chapter 1
.....
before you came.
into my life.
my life was hell.
then you stepped in.
you fixed it.
took it all away.
you stole my heart.
i would have to write.
a million poems.
to make you know.
how much i love you.
i cant breathe without you.
your the greatest person.
iv ever met.
i hope that someday.
we can be together.
ill look into your eyes.
then...
itll be just you and me.
well be in a place were...
the sun blends in with the ocean.
were we wont be bothered.
by the outside world.
you amaze me.
you leave me breathless.
your hair.
it flows like the ocean waves.
your eyes.
they take me away.
your perfect.
in every way.
so ill just keep waiting.
waiting....waiting....
for you.
into my life.
my life was hell.
then you stepped in.
you fixed it.
took it all away.
you stole my heart.
i would have to write.
a million poems.
to make you know.
how much i love you.
i cant breathe without you.
your the greatest person.
iv ever met.
i hope that someday.
we can be together.
ill look into your eyes.
then...
itll be just you and me.
well be in a place were...
the sun blends in with the ocean.
were we wont be bothered.
by the outside world.
you amaze me.
you leave me breathless.
your hair.
it flows like the ocean waves.
your eyes.
they take me away.
your perfect.
in every way.
so ill just keep waiting.
waiting....waiting....
for you.
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That's sooooo sweet nd romantic
=O I CANNOT SPEAK!!!
such a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww it really good!! :):)
Awwwweeeeeesssssssssss! So sweet, nice poem. Loved your descriptions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its good;)
i love yur poems they are awesome!! 5 stars
aww, that's sweet, stay lucky with her
:) thank u guys...........love you megan!!
love you too luca!! hehe
some day you wont have to wait anymore...i promise (: