Ever After...NOT!!!!
This is the untold stories of some well known Fairytale Girls, who've changed from the stories we know so well!
The stories are set 5 years after what happens in the original stories! Hope you enjoy this twisted fairytale & comment, please!!
SugarKart is Red Hood; Lnyx_Minx is Aurora; Sonicxrules is Goldilocks; kewlgirls is Snow White; Simmo123 is Gretel; thehamster is Alice; XneonstrawberriX is the Ballerina Doll; prettystranger is Rapunzel; And paramore789 is Belle!
Everyone knows the story of Little Red Riding Hood, but not what happened 5 years later! So, I'll tell ya my story!
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My Grandma was sick, so mum asked me to go & give her some medicine. I loved the woods & my new boyfriend, Hansel. He was tall & handsome, Gretels' brother. I looked at him & smiled.
He smiled back. "So, is your Granny nice?" he asked, holding my hand.
"Very" I grinned, moving closer. "She'll just love you"
I looked around the woods, my grin fading abit. I knew he was there some where. Those glowing green eyes & silver fur. He was there, always there. Hansel gripped my hand harder & I looked at him.
"What's wrong?" he whispered.
"Oh" I said, laughing. "I was just thinking of something that happened long ago."
We walked for about 3 minutes more before Grannys house came into veiw. A small, white cottage with round windows & ivy growing up the walls. I loved this house & the woods, but my 10 year old memory was much unloved. Hansel knocked on the door & the door swung open. I peered in & approached the bed. No wolf, just my granny.
"How is my grandchild?" she croaked, smiling. "And who is this?"
"This is Hansel" I smiled back. "Hansel, this is Granny"
"How do you do?" he grinned, shaking her hand.
"Oh, I'm fine now" she replied, croakily.
We chatted for a while & I made tea & arranged her medicine. Hansel escorted her to the table & we sat down for tea & biscuits. I'd never felt so relaxed before. I glanced at Granny & Hansel: both chattering about the woods & about how good I can make tea. I smiled, getting up, & walked over to the window.
What I saw made me drop my cup & bolt for the open door! He was here...And he wanted REVENGE
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My Grandma was sick, so mum asked me to go & give her some medicine. I loved the woods & my new boyfriend, Hansel. He was tall & handsome, Gretels' brother. I looked at him & smiled.
He smiled back. "So, is your Granny nice?" he asked, holding my hand.
"Very" I grinned, moving closer. "She'll just love you"
I looked around the woods, my grin fading abit. I knew he was there some where. Those glowing green eyes & silver fur. He was there, always there. Hansel gripped my hand harder & I looked at him.
"What's wrong?" he whispered.
"Oh" I said, laughing. "I was just thinking of something that happened long ago."
We walked for about 3 minutes more before Grannys house came into veiw. A small, white cottage with round windows & ivy growing up the walls. I loved this house & the woods, but my 10 year old memory was much unloved. Hansel knocked on the door & the door swung open. I peered in & approached the bed. No wolf, just my granny.
"How is my grandchild?" she croaked, smiling. "And who is this?"
"This is Hansel" I smiled back. "Hansel, this is Granny"
"How do you do?" he grinned, shaking her hand.
"Oh, I'm fine now" she replied, croakily.
We chatted for a while & I made tea & arranged her medicine. Hansel escorted her to the table & we sat down for tea & biscuits. I'd never felt so relaxed before. I glanced at Granny & Hansel: both chattering about the woods & about how good I can make tea. I smiled, getting up, & walked over to the window.
What I saw made me drop my cup & bolt for the open door! He was here...And he wanted REVENGE
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vve some of you wrote a bit is wat is in chpt 2
Ahahaha great name !
i have written the third chapter enjoy hopefully i havent screwed it up please comment
REVENGE lol
Okay, my friend, who was writing chapter 2, didn't understand my instructions, so I wrote it instead. Here are the instructions again:
1. Write a chapter about your character & tie it in with the one before. (Eg. I write as Red, Lynx_Minx writes as Aurora: Red meets Aurora)
2. The story is set 5 years after the original stories & must mention this at the begining (Eg. Read chapter 1 & 2)
3. Try your best with spelling & paragraphs & have fun!!!
Oops, SugarKart wrote both chapters!!
ME!!!
Sorry!
If you're supposed to write about your own character, I'm done with my chapter. I was about to put it out today but you gave to somebody else. I don't want to be a part of this story if I have to get it out right away.
Sorry for tryin' to rush everyone, but people I gave the story to said they couldn't & people were anxious!!!
I'm so sorry!
Looks like a really good story. Can't wait to read next chapter!
REVENGE!!!!!!!
I'll write the chapter after thehamster!
When will the next chapter come out?
Dunno, I past it to thehamster!!