My Immortal With Commentary.

WARNING- Not my fault if you die from your brain shriveling up.
DISCLAIMER- I hope to god I didn't make My Immortal.
CLAIMER- I made the intelligent bold words.

Chapter 1

Chapter -shivers- one.

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) Wait....your a vampire? :O 2 my gf (ew not in that way) You know you like it ;) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way Demntia- Lack of brain cells. It explains EVERYTHING and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) I have gold hair. That's how I got the name Goldie-Locks with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). Dang... I know who she is... I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major phucking hottie INCEST!!!! yum ;) xD . I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. SPARKLE BITCH! SPARKLE! I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England SCOTLAND! where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) And a satanist. and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. ... Scary.... I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation Does is make your skin sparkle properly?!?! , black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. If they stared at me I'd kick their balls. I'm cooler

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Amy Lee, Micheal Jackson? Justin Beiber? MY MOTHER?!?! Draco Malfoy! Uh...Him too

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly.Yeah right!

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! Erm... If I say yes I'll get hated. If I say no I'll die a glittering death....

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