black hole (a poem)

this is my fav poem ive ever writtn...give me sum feed back plz, postive or negative it doesnt matter....thxx

Chapter 1

black hole

my soul, is like a black hole, that empties into space. the good, the positive, my laughs, my cry's, they all end up in another universe. unable to be found. My heart is full, full of sadness and depression. my heart is full of tears and pain. My heart is a bottomless pit of nothingness, just waiting to be found. My hopes and dreams are lost like a kid. A kid who is left at the store, screaming for his mom. My heart screams out "help me" but only in fear, fear of diing alone. my heart, my soul, is nothing.....but a black hole


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