Im in a depressing mood today for reasons...anyways I wrote this
Chapter 1
Emos legacy
Soul-less outcast
Emotions could cloud our minds with confusion
Turing our very bodies into living tourment
Sacraficing every joy we used to feel...
Take me away
To a place not meant for sorrow
Take me away
To a place where im not left to wonder in a world made
Of pain and agony
Take me...
No,save me...
From this world where im just a meare soul
Dancing around my sins
Ignored...
Alone...
Forgotten...
Save me
from being banished from society
Take me away
To a place where I feel like they could hear me
Save my already darkened heart from being crushed
Break me away
Where emotions like this never exist
Save me...the emo outcast
Emotions could cloud our minds with confusion
Turing our very bodies into living tourment
Sacraficing every joy we used to feel...
Take me away
To a place not meant for sorrow
Take me away
To a place where im not left to wonder in a world made
Of pain and agony
Take me...
No,save me...
From this world where im just a meare soul
Dancing around my sins
Ignored...
Alone...
Forgotten...
Save me
from being banished from society
Take me away
To a place where I feel like they could hear me
Save my already darkened heart from being crushed
Break me away
Where emotions like this never exist
Save me...the emo outcast
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Hiiiiiiii
this is a really awesome poem
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once again...not the way I intended -_- nothing works around here
aww...that didn't come out the way I wanted it to -_-
I hope you feel better.....but it's a great poem
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i can feel ur emotion very good poem i do hope u feel better
Thumbs up this comment if this is sad, amazing, and wonderful all at the same time.
Sorry you had a depressing day, magnificent poem, it's sad and it's something I can understand
Sorry you had a depressing day, magnificent poem, it's sad and it's something I can understand
aww! It's really sad. :( I hope you feel better.