Story Review 2012 Edition

Sorry. I didn't have the time to continue with Story Review.

For those that doesn't know what Story Review is/does:
-It's where I can write opinions about an author/authors stories. I hope that my comments will make more people read the author/authors stories.
-I rate 1-25, 25 being the hightest and 1 to be the lowest.
-I'll be posting this daily or whenever.
-Story Review: poems, drawings, talents, any as well. Just ask me to add.

Chapter 1

Updated: 6-23-12

StaceyCasey feat. Fab4Forever and GreenDragonGirl

Scars of a Rune (A Mortal Instruments Fanfiction)

Rating: 24

Comment:

What's very interesting of this story is how you can identify the voice. It feels like I'm actually sitting in front of StaceyCasey and her friends. Like a story time. I also like the characters of Scars of a Rune. They’re so connected with how life is today. Excellent job you guys.

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Alex117 feat. Canuckmom

Creatures of the Night

Rating: 25

Comment:

I find this to be very fun. I can really see Creatures of the Night to be a great anime. I like Ivy of the story. When I first read to Ivy's point of view on Crimson, I thought she was a very funny character. She reminds me on this anime character who is likely to jump into conclusions. Anyway, you guys should read Creatures of the Night if you love anime. If you're ever looking for an anime to watch or a manga to read, I suggest Creatures of the Night. (Notice how I repeat the name. It means it's very good.)

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Team_Weasley

Safe and sound (Sequel to the snake doesn't love the lion, a Hogwarts love story)

Rating: 25

Comment:

This is awesome as the first book! XD
I love this story and the first. I can't decide which! You guys will love Safe and Sound, a sequel to "The Snake Doesn't Love The Lion". (Also known as a Harry Potter fan fiction.) We meet with Amelia today, or whatever day it is for you, through another amazing adventure. As I read this first chapter of Safe and Sound, I found this to be extreme catch. The feeling I can give to you about Amelia is caring, smart, and very interesting. I know, deep inside, you want to read. But if you want to know who Amelia is, then you must read (if she still has it) The Snake Doesn't Love The Lion.

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FlyLikeItsQuidditch21

I Found You At Last (Alex Summers/Havoc) X-Men:First Class

Rating: 25

Comment:

Marvel is my favorite comic books! And the X-Men is one of my favorite group of heroes. And the movie, "X-Men: First Class", AWESOME!!!! Now reading "I Found You At Last", it’s like watching a deeper part of the story in "X-Men: First Class". If you love super heroes (especially when it’s base off of Marvel and the X-Men), you’ll love this one. Will I give the character(s) name(s)? No. You must read it for yourself. Now as you are reading, create a movie in your head. Trust me, the way the author wrote it, it needs to be in a movie! Create a lot of effects and visualize how the character(s) looks and feels. If you are a director, and reading this review, you better meet this girl in person and say, "I want to make your story into a movie!"

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GuiltyPleasure

A Fish Out Of Water

Rating: 23

Comment:

First off, I find the title to be interesting. Honestly, I thought it would be like a metaphor and won’t really relate to the sea. But it reminds me of H2O. (If you remember, it was TeenNick show.) But I rather read "A Fish Out Of Water" than to watch H2O. Okay, H2O (If you love the show, scan through because I will say bad stuff about it.) is stupid. Mermaids… Whoa. Not very exciting show. I mean mermaids are cool, but watching that show sucks! Anyway, I can actually see how the author connects to the main character and gives foreshadow. (Foreshadow: A literature element, you should know in your English class and or language arts, to gives hints about what the story is going to be.) So that’s when I realize, it was somewhat a metaphor, but it does involve the sea. It’s very sweet and it’s better than H2O.

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TeeHeeImaHipster feat. The_Nialler_Inside

Stole My Heart âž¡(1D Fanfic)

Rating: 25

Comment:

1 Direction is a pretty good band. You know what makes them better? If they had someone to write a fan fictional story about them. But it must be hard for them to find a perfect story about them. Maybe.Who can help them? TeeHeeImaHispster and The_Nialler_Inside are available. And you know what? "Stole My Heart" should be their next song because this story is freaking amazing!!!! Of course everyone’s story is amazing, I’m boasting your confidence in each other! Anyway, I didn't really image the life of 1 Direction to be. Using the incredible imagination of the 2 authors can really make you think otherwise. READ IT!!!

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Drvampiregirl feat. DaughterofDreams

The Mimic Girl

Rating: 24

Comment:

What I love about "The Mimic Girl" is the name Rathina. That is such a beautiful name. I wish I was named that. Also Adalia is a beautiful name too. When I saw the title, "The Mimic Girl", I was thinking about a puppet. But it turn out to be vampires. Vampire puppets? XD I don’t know. Maybe you should read to see if I'm right about the vampire puppets. All I can say, you'll never want to stop reading. You'll be reading forever and ever. Besides, it’s required in life. You hate reading, I'm surprise you're reading this comment.

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cheerleaderhannah

You're Mine

Rating: 23

Comment:

Is this girl my friend? No not really. She was requested by a friend of mine to read her story and I did. Yeah. So. I find this to be very casual, not to extreme and mystical. More life situated. As I read the story, I didn’t find anything out of the ordinary. So if you want to find answers to your life or find something that could be similar, I suggest you read "You’re Mine". Trust me, when you read the first paragraph of chapter 1, you might read a little bit further to understand about the boyfriend who had gone crazy. And you would like to know what happens to the girl.

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A side note from creator:

Hey guys. I thank you for reading the comments. I hope that reading what I have to say about each and everyone of your story(ies) will give you results and confidence. I know you guys are excellent writers and I hope you do continue the lesson you can give to those who wish to write. And for that, we thank you. audience claps for the authors

Now. I know I haven't done Story Review since December 2011. That was when I was getting ready to move. By Feb. 2012, I said I wouldn't be able to continue Story Review till I moved to Japan. (For those that don't know, I'm in Japan. Time will be different, so I may get the date wrong for you guys.) And then I kept saying I would continue as soon as the internet came back to the laptop. Turns out I was too busy to even start it. But finally! I manage to start on it.

Story Review is to boast confidence in you and others. Inspire one another.
You may also request someone else's story(ies). Just email me with this title:

Story Review: Request

-Yes. It must be like that. Or something related to that title.

For those that has nothing better to do. Please read their stories. Reading their stories will mean a lot.

Hope you all continue to write and read.

Sincerely,

Hatter

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