Twilight: Re-done, Re-written, The Right Way

Twilight: Re-done, Re-written, The Right Way

Quick Note! I absolutely hated Twilight, so I'm gonna re-write it, with a good Vampire story, proper developing feelings, proper reactions towards things, (Like being scared when your crush is a vampire, duh) and deep characters.
Jacob will stay relatively the same throughout the story.

Chapter 1

PREFACE

by: EliWarp
I'd never thought much about how I would die. I always thought I was much too young for such thoughts. But over the last few months, fear took over my mind, and made me think of the many things that could happen if I wasn't careful.
I held my breath as I looked across the room, into the dark eyes of my killer, and he smiled gruesomely at me.
I thought of how I had risked everything for something that was absolutely hopeless, and became angry at myself. My stupidity got me here, and there was nothing I could do to escape it.
I knew if I had never done my mother that favour, never came to Forks, I wouldn't be facing death this early in life. But, deep in my mind, I knew I couldn't regret my decision. If weren't for my decision, I would have never met him.
The hunter gave one last smile before he sauntered forward to kill me.

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