Change [Underediting] Novel (First Paragraph) Tell Me What You Think
Grace is a young optimistic British girl, who's life is beautiful. Her father is her ultimate hero, and loves him dearly. Yet, when he is forced to join the great war, Grace's life is changed completely. She has to live in fear of her father in the awful war, and witnesses such destruction. Through her time of darkness, she hopes for this war to end, and that her father will come home safe, but she still finds it quite difficult in a time of crisis, like this one.
It's June 2nd, 1914. Grace was more determined than ever. Yet, she didn't know what for. She arranged a time to finish the story she had been trying to write, a month ago. She had stopped at a certain point. She didn't know where the story was going. She didn't know the plot yet. She only had three words written, but today she was sure of what it was to be about. Grace had a love for writing, and she was indeed very good at it.
This is only the first paragraph.
Tell me what you think. I'll write more tomorrow. I'm not quite satisfied with the title, so I may change it. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this first paragraph.