Love You Like A Love Song (HP And Twilight Story) With commentary & Rewritten

First chapter will be the commentary.
The second chapter will be the rewritten part.

Chapter 1

Welcum 2 hogwarts. -Dear God. We begin.-

AN: I luv twilight shudders and harri potoor nd i put dem 2gether nd made dis!! I wnt god comments!!
God- Don't write anymore.
Me- The lord has spoken.


My name iz Bella Swan. Wen I waz born dis ashole charlie kidnapped me frm my reel parents Astoria nd lucyus maloy Hun, they probably sold you . whn i was 16 dat ashols wife meenee told me da troth nd I went to c my reel ooparnts astoriya nd lucio.

My reel mum nd dad wee waaaaaaaaay better lokin den doose b----s dat kidnaped me. astro had long red swishy hair and green eys nd i waz jellouys of her prettiness but den i rmm berd i was prettir an it was ok Bella Swan is never, and will never be better, prettier, smarter, and more emotional than the Harry Potter. :D

I aslo gt a nw bro his name iz draco. he was reelly hot Incest is the best! Put your sister to the test! and blonde lyk a gud prep!! so he ad hot frinds tht ccam ove alot 2 play xbox 320 At least wizards play Xbox !!!. I kikd there azzes @ it becoz im gud @ it Remember what I said? You're never, and will never be better than the Harry Potter characters. :D

1 of his hawt friends FRIENDS?! HAHAHAHA- no. is caled harry. Harry was totally hot. Lyk relly rlly hawt.

1 day we wnt 2 hogwarts. I was wereinga shot tite mini dress tht was dark purpl nd spakld, black leether hi heels nd mi lon waste legthdark bown hair was down aand i had sparkli ishadow on and iliner. I locked hot. California girls, we're undeniable, Fine, fresh, fierce, We got it on lock!

"bella dis iz ur new home. :D" drac said 2 me.
"hogwartz is kwl." i said bac.

den we went to the dining hall 2 eat. Harri was der. I almst fanted bcoz of hw hot he iz!

"Hi Harr!!!" I id
"hi bel Da Beautifulll!!!"he sad bac. Bel Da Beautifull was da nicknam he gave last sparklung Eating sparklers are bad for your health tunesday
"How r u/?" i said bac
gud" he said back "U?"
"gud" aI said bac.

Den we ate food.

Den a fat guy hit me -claps- My hero. for ating his food so harry nd hizz frand ron (how waz hot 222!!!) beat him up and harri asked me 2 go out on a d8, I said no so he wuld cry Harry wouldn't cry for you. He probably was dared to do that, and is jumping for joy that you denied him :]


Commentary by me.
Story by Dannirawrrrr

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